As I inhale the toxic air. I stare out into the cesspool of pitiful waste.
Slowly dying on the inside as humanity devours itself.

good write

thank you

Nice .

thanks

Hi Dawg, may I be presumptuous and add a few lines to your poem please?

please do

As I inhale the toxic air, I stare out into the cesspool of pitiful waste.
Slowly dying on the inside as humanity devours itself.

You poison me. You hunt me. You haunt me.
My waters, my air, my land; you desecrate.
Swimming, flying, walking creatures choke, starve,
are banished ... then extinct.

I want to vomit you out of me,
Off me.
Your darkness I challenge, by the fury of a fire,
an inferno so bright you will be blind.

More blind, than you are now.

Faithfully,
Mother Earth.

beautiful

Yours is nice too Notlooking .

I really liked your two lines of poetry. I did change your original meaning, (was great) to be a cry or warning from Mother Earth.

Dawg, if I wrote two lines of a poem, would you care to add more?

Hmm, I think I will just do it and if anyone finds a passion to respond, they shall.
Happy days Dawg. May you find all you search for