Topic: Forbidden Fruit
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Sat 03/27/21 12:50 AM
Edited by Jasmine on Sat 03/27/21 12:55 AM
Eyes met, we met,
Chat and friendship in progress,
New love, new chance,
Happiness, affection,
A budding romance...

A taste of your lips,
A blush on my face,
Touching your hands,
Melting in your embrace...

So good yet we fear,
What ifs fill our mind,
Should we go our separate ways,
Knowing this connection is,
One of a kind..

Why we been accused,
The atmosphere is getting tense,
Its hard to stay calm,
Nothing is making any sense,

People have started talking,
Getting angry and rude,
Everyone is on edge,
And preaching us about evil and good,

Now we are been taught,
What to do and don't,
The shouldn'ts and shoulds,
Why everyone is acting as if,
We have tasted,
The forbidden fruit..

JulieABush's photo
Sat 03/27/21 12:57 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Sat 03/27/21 01:22 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thanks smile2

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Sat 03/27/21 10:39 AM
let the heart leads

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Sat 03/27/21 08:02 PM

let the heart leads


:thumbsup: smile2

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Sun 03/28/21 06:40 AM
Edited by Laska Paul on Sun 03/28/21 06:41 AM

Eyes met, we met,
Chat and friendship in progress,
New love, new chance,
Happiness, affection,
A budding romance...

A taste of your lips,
A blush on my face,
Touching your hands,
Melting in your embrace...

So good yet we fear,
What ifs fill our mind,
Should we go our separate ways,
Knowing this connection is,
One of a kind..

Why we been accused,
The atmosphere is getting tense,


Its hard to stay calm,
Nothing is making any sense,

People have started talking,
Getting angry and rude,
Everyone is on edge,
And preaching us about evil and good,

Now we are been taught,
What to do and don't,
The shouldn'ts and shoulds,
Why everyone is acting as if,
We have tasted,
The forbidden fruit..



You have changed a Lot from Beautiful to Pretty . What's the Magic ??
I do not have anything to Comment on Your Poem b'coz Nice Poem does not need any Comments !

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Sun 03/28/21 07:07 AM

Eyes met, we met,
Chat and friendship in progress,
New love, new chance,
Happiness, affection,
A budding romance...

A taste of your lips,
A blush on my face,
Touching your hands,
Melting in your embrace...

So good yet we fear,
What ifs fill our mind,
Should we go our separate ways,
Knowing this connection is,
One of a kind..

Why we been accused,
The atmosphere is getting tense,
Its hard to stay calm,
Nothing is making any sense,

People have started talking,
Getting angry and rude,
Everyone is on edge,
And preaching us about evil and good,

Now we are been taught,
What to do and don't,
The shouldn'ts and shoulds,
Why everyone is acting as if,
We have tasted,
The forbidden fruit..



Good poem...was it written in rememberance of someone that ate your forbidden fruit pitchfork

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Mon 03/29/21 10:49 PM


Eyes met, we met,
Chat and friendship in progress,
New love, new chance,
Happiness, affection,
A budding romance...

A taste of your lips,
A blush on my face,
Touching your hands,
Melting in your embrace...

So good yet we fear,
What ifs fill our mind,
Should we go our separate ways,
Knowing this connection is,
One of a kind..

Why we been accused,
The atmosphere is getting tense,


Its hard to stay calm,
Nothing is making any sense,

People have started talking,
Getting angry and rude,
Everyone is on edge,
And preaching us about evil and good,

Now we are been taught,
What to do and don't,
The shouldn'ts and shoulds,
Why everyone is acting as if,
We have tasted,
The forbidden fruit..



You have changed a Lot from Beautiful to Pretty . What's the Magic ??
I do not have anything to Comment on Your Poem b'coz Nice Poem does not need any Comments !


I guess I have to thank my ex bf for the magic! lol
And thanks for calling my poem nice smile2

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Wed 03/31/21 03:58 AM



Eyes met, we met,
Chat and friendship in progress,
New love, new chance,
Happiness, affection,
A budding romance...

A taste of your lips,
A blush on my face,
Touching your hands,
Melting in your embrace...

So good yet we fear,
What ifs fill our mind,
Should we go our separate ways,
Knowing this connection is,
One of a kind..

Why we been accused,
The atmosphere is getting tense,


Its hard to stay calm,
Nothing is making any sense,

People have started talking,
Getting angry and rude,
Everyone is on edge,
And preaching us about evil and good,

Now we are been taught,
What to do and don't,
The shouldn'ts and shoulds,
Why everyone is acting as if,
We have tasted,
The forbidden fruit..



You have changed a Lot from Beautiful to Pretty . What's the Magic ??
I do not have anything to Comment on Your Poem b'coz Nice Poem does not need any Comments !


I guess I have to thank my ex bf for the magic! lol
And thanks for calling my poem nice smile2




Hey, I'm supposed to be the only unknown one here mad

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Mon 04/19/21 08:59 PM
:thumbsup:

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Tue 04/20/21 12:10 AM

:thumbsup:

smile2

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Wed 04/21/21 04:55 AM
Wow!!!!

Nice poem :thumbsup:

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Wed 04/21/21 10:47 PM

Wow!!!!

Nice poem :thumbsup:


Thank you smile2