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| Topic: Yay, my first poem in my age of 30 🤦 | |
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Edited by
Güney
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Sun 05/16/21 02:29 AM
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Eyes star-bright sparkles and shades full of color,
Hair is a wave of heavenly flames caught my heart on fire, Inviting are the lips just as the most fruitful vineyards to have a taste, Skin smooth as the calming wave or more like a warm sands in the midsummer,  Although hard to describe your beauty, It seems there is more to your story, Think of me free, I hope everything is dandy, Would you date me if I bring you a daisy with some candy.  I wrote this for someone, waiting for their response. Hoping it won't be too harsh for my poor heart. |
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Nice poem
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Edited by
Güney
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Sun 05/16/21 05:43 AM
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Nice poem . Thank you, my first go on poetry. Tried to keep it simple. Not my native language but I gave it my best shot. |
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Eyes star-bright sparkles and shades full of color, Hair is a wave of heavenly flames caught my heart on fire, Inviting are the lips just as the most fruitful vineyards to have a taste, Skin smooth as the calming wave or more like a warm sands in the midsummer, Although hard to describe your beauty, It seems there is more to your story, Think of me free, I hope everything is dandy, Would you date me if I bring you a daisy with some candy. I wrote this for someone, waiting for their response. Hoping it won't be too harsh for my poor heart. Naww, lovely. I hope she responds positively. |
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Minle2's newest poet
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