Topic: Too much love... for Carole
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Fri 05/28/21 02:55 AM
Edited by Unknow on Fri 05/28/21 03:46 AM
Some move too fiery fast,
some move at the ocean's calm knots.

What is your medium,
what is your lot?

As for me and my household -
you do not move
at all
when the lady grieves
lost love.

Move
away if
without
understanding love lost
is a grief
you can not touch
without respect
for life
and love.

So, so lost in regret
of my hand
that blocked
your next words

that said so much.

each finger locked protected our hearts,
I was our protection,
I thought
before you passed.

Damn love,
damn the never-ending grief.

I accept
you are the ghost
that haunts me
forever

Not a day goes by without your cold, warm kiss.

Noone knows

You and I are what makes me
untouchable. Xxx







Not finished...
much more to add,
she touches the depths of me :broken_heart:



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Fri 05/28/21 03:59 AM
Edited by Unknow on Fri 05/28/21 04:03 AM
To whom gets it

Trixie's photo
Fri 05/28/21 05:17 AM

To whom gets it


:heart:

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Fri 05/28/21 05:39 AM


To whom gets it


:heart:


❤ Shame there were not more people here with a heart..but we do connect and know who we are :heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

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Fri 05/28/21 02:56 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 06/13/21 09:51 PM
So beautiful and tragic.

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Wed 06/16/21 04:25 AM

So beautiful and tragic.


Thanks bro xxx

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Fri 06/18/21 04:12 AM
Sublime

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Fri 06/18/21 04:21 AM

Sublime


Thanks :grinning:

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Fri 06/18/21 04:21 AM
Edited by Unknow on Fri 06/18/21 04:22 AM
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