Topic: You taste like lightening
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Tue 06/08/21 09:57 PM
I think you taste like lightening.
At first a soft tingle,
then a bolt,
that rushes down my body

I am on fire
for more.

That guttural sound you make
is heaven
breaking the sky -

A primal, baritone thunder
as deep calls to deep.












JulieABush's photo
Wed 06/09/21 12:56 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

ivegotthegirth's photo
Wed 06/09/21 01:27 AM
I think it's more than nice, it's fantastic! :heart:

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Wed 06/09/21 09:52 PM
Thanks...:heart:

technovative's photo
Thu 06/10/21 08:36 AM
Sensational! Elegant expression depicting a universally relatable and palpable force of nature.

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Thu 06/10/21 03:34 PM

Sensational! Elegant expression depicting a universally relatable and palpable force of nature.


Thanks Techno flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Fri 06/11/21 10:26 PM

I think you taste like lightening.
At first a soft tingle,
then a bolt,
that rushes down my body

I am on fire
for more.

That guttural sound you make
is heaven
breaking the sky -

A primal, baritone thunder
as deep calls to deep.

Umm, yeah, this one is, well, umm, breathtaking













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Sat 06/12/21 01:10 AM
Thanks Mig, it makes me smile that people read more than what my metaphors say.

No need to feel awkward.flowerforyou