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Topic: Lonely but with you
Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Sun 01/09/22 11:59 PM
Where are you? why you left me? where I can find you? When we can meet again? Lots of question within me - but am still with you - Your presence is not there your fragrance is not there your smile is not there - but am still with you - Am lonely in the planet but am still with you

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Mon 01/10/22 12:49 AM
Nice poem .

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19466	Mon 01/10/22 01:47 AM
Poetry Writing is not an Easy Task . It should have precision , flow , Creative , Rhyming and Framing . But that does not mean Your Poetry is Bad . There are many Poets here who writes from within the Heart . While reading their poems, it takes us to Disneyland, sorry Fantasy Land. As a reader I am happy though your Poetry is too short. And as Part of encouragement I will give you 7/10 on scale . You lost 3 marks bcoz your Poetry is too short plus the Topic could have been Simple Yet Sweet . Hope we all can read a lot from you in the Near Future. Thank You .. This is Laska Paul .

Lessi Joined Mon 01/10/22 Posts: 1	Mon 01/10/22 01:49 AM


Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Mon 01/10/22 02:50 AM
Nice poem . Thank you

Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Mon 01/10/22 02:51 AM
Poetry Writing is not an Easy Task . It should have precision , flow , Creative , Rhyming and Framing . But that does not mean Your Poetry is Bad . There are many Poets here who writes from within the Heart . While reading their poems, it takes us to Disneyland, sorry Fantasy Land. As a reader I am happy though your Poetry is too short. And as Part of encouragement I will give you 7/10 on scale . You lost 3 marks bcoz your Poetry is too short plus the Topic could have been Simple Yet Sweet . Hope we all can read a lot from you in the Near Future. Thank You .. This is Laska Paul . Thank you Mr. Laska Paul - Am not a big writer of poems - thanks for your encouragement sure will write a big poem in near future . Thanks a lot

Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Mon 01/10/22 02:52 AM
I can't understand Ms. Lessi

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54070	Wed 04/20/22 11:30 PM
Where are you? why you left me? where I can find you? When we can meet again? Lots of question within me - but am still with you - Your presence is not there your fragrance is not there your smile is not there - but am still with you - Am lonely in the planet but am still with you NICE Loneliness is my best friend. I don't expect from any. That's the reason of Happiness..

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