Topic: Poem i just wrote. Pick a title plz
Ricky Paul's photo
Thu 08/04/22 09:01 PM
Hi,
My name is irrelevant
I hide behind a mask.

oh this pain inside,
I know it cant last

Ive been through so much,
But haven't came all that far

Or maybe i have,
but in my head its so hard

To tell the difference
From a life an life sentence.
I guess im,
just paying a penance

From where i was,to where i am,
none of us can understand God's plan,

But im tryin.
I wake up an keep sighing,
But instead of crying
I look in the mirror,
say no more lyin

You can do this man.
trust in God's plan,

your a believer

And the grace Jesus died to give you grace,
And u have received it,
So. Believe it

And

Yeah this world is so dark,
And so are most hearts
But if you look to the Lord,
Hes the one who wont depart,

Maybe

Then you can heal.
And yeah that pain is real,
And yeah you could heal,
But we choose not to feel,

So

find peace and be still.
That devil is real,
Comes to lie and kill,
Destroy and then steal

But we can overcome,
All that we were,
All that weve done.

And

All that weve been,
So let go of your sin,
No need to turn back again

Keep on pushing forward,
Forward ,Onward, and up

Towards something,
that fills you with love,
But dont give up.
Its in God we should trust

And kniw this.

You can reach
the end of this race,
Keep seeking God's face
Until you find your place

I know you're hurting,
Been deserted.
Been told your worthless
And none of us deserves that.

Or mybe

we definitely all do,
but all those things you went through,
Yea they made you, you .

So be proud of yourself
But Not to proud to ask for help
But still just proud enough
To pick up whats left

And remember
Come December.

It's gonna be a new year
all the same old fears
will repeat,
But know this,
It dont gotta repeat,
you can definitely defeat,

All the past versions

Of yourself
You dont need no one else

Except you and Jesus.
Believe this!!!

Vibes's photo
Thu 08/04/22 10:31 PM
Nice versions

The sea within
Typical mentions
I am what I am
Be what I should
Grasping out
God's will
All is well
God is to heal !


 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Thu 08/04/22 11:17 PM
Hi,
My name is irrelevant
I hide behind a mask.

oh this pain inside,
I know it cant last

Ive been through so much,
But haven't came all that far

Or maybe i have,
but in my head its so hard

To tell the difference
From a life an life sentence.
I guess im,
just paying a penance

From where i was,to where i am,
none of us can understand God's plan,

But im tryin.
I wake up an keep sighing,
But instead of crying
I look in the mirror,
say no more lyin

You can do this man.
trust in God's plan,

your a believer

And the grace Jesus died to give you grace,
And u have received it,
So. Believe it

And

Yeah this world is so dark,
And so are most hearts
But if you look to the Lord,
Hes the one who wont depart,

Maybe

Then you can heal.
And yeah that pain is real,
And yeah you could heal,
But we choose not to feel,

So

find peace and be still.
That devil is real,
Comes to lie and kill,
Destroy and then steal

But we can overcome,
All that we were,
All that weve done.

And

All that weve been,
So let go of your sin,
No need to turn back again

Keep on pushing forward,
Forward ,Onward, and up

Towards something,
that fills you with love,
But dont give up.
Its in God we should trust

And kniw this.

You can reach
the end of this race,
Keep seeking God's face
Until you find your place

I know you're hurting,
Been deserted.
Been told your worthless
And none of us deserves that.

Or mybe

we definitely all do,
but all those things you went through,
Yea they made you, you .

So be proud of yourself
But Not to proud to ask for help
But still just proud enough
To pick up whats left

And remember
Come December.

It's gonna be a new year
all the same old fears
will repeat,
But know this,
It dont gotta repeat,
you can definitely defeat,

All the past versions

Of yourself
You dont need no one else

Except you and Jesus.
Believe this!!!

N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:

Aatheera's photo
Thu 08/04/22 11:40 PM
Interesting to read while it brought a feel of calmness, Keep writing :sparkles:

As you've mentioned, Believer would be the nice choice.

Laska Paul 's photo
Fri 08/05/22 12:29 AM


"Beyond The Horizon"

JulieABush's photo
Fri 08/05/22 12:42 AM
Nice poem whatever you decide the title might be:thumbsup: :wink: .

no photo
Fri 08/05/22 05:13 AM
Pick a title....

Know the holiness of my love.



Your golden finger
etched law, then dripped loves nailed blood.
Faithful is my friend.


sonofrangi's photo
Sun 09/04/22 03:58 AM
Edited by sonofrangi on Sun 09/04/22 04:00 AM
" To Strive in what you believe in..never giving up what you know is right...keep knocking them hurdles down as more will surely come but easier they shall be to jump over....soon they'll just be another challenge...and a challenge you'll accept, conquer and move forward :heart: .....for Ladywind happy

oceanbird's photo
Tue 08/01/23 05:55 AM
TITLE.."LIFES' BETTER WITH GOD"