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Topic: Misty Morning Rain
Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Sat 12/31/22 12:41 PM
I love the mist that sprinkles down from the sky in the mornings of a rainy day, It just brings a calming peace inside though it's quite cloudy and grey Somehow, I just can't seem to get out of my pajamas and this cup of coffee sure taste great, I'm excited like a kid all because the rain It's quite amazing to see how everything has changed, the wet cement on the ground the puddles here and there the dew on the flowers how beautiful they lay Now the rain's a little stronger with big droplets falling from the sky on the ground preforming pirouettes dancing with much life The clouds are all so puffy with streaks of white and grey I can't see the sun for it had gone away, Hiding behind the clouds that roll by such is this beautiful place, as nature tends to come alive right before my face.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2630	Sat 12/31/22 10:28 PM
Pleasing rhyme and meter you've used in this cheery poem about a dreary day.

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54365	Sun 01/01/23 02:30 AM
I love the mist that sprinkles down from the sky in the mornings of a rainy day, It just brings a calming peace inside though it's quite cloudy and grey Somehow, I just can't seem to get out of my pajamas and this cup of coffee sure taste great, I'm excited like a kid all because the rain It's quite amazing to see how everything has changed, the wet cement on the ground the puddles here and there the dew on the flowers how beautiful they lay Now the rain's a little stronger with big droplets falling from the sky on the ground preforming pirouettes dancing with much life The clouds are all so puffy with streaks of white and grey I can't see the sun for it had gone away, Hiding behind the clouds that roll by such is this beautiful place, as nature tends to come alive right before my face. NICE

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3192	Sun 01/01/23 03:12 AM
Nice poem .

Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Sun 01/01/23 08:45 AM Edited by Unknow on Sun 01/01/23 08:49 AM
Thank you, I enjoy writing poems.

Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Sun 01/01/23 08:46 AM Edited by Unknow on Sun 01/01/23 08:47 AM
I love the rain.

Merry Joined Fri 11/19/21 Posts: 12324	Sun 01/01/23 08:54 AM
Beautiful poem Alovi

Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Sun 01/01/23 09:03 AM
Beautiful poem Alovi Thank you.

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 48276	Sun 01/01/23 06:36 PM
Nice description of the rainy day Words with cogency Well script coherently Written concurrently Well done efficiently

AαƚHҽҽɾα Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 3632	Mon 01/02/23 05:01 AM
Lovely ❤, you've kindled the bliss of rain in me while reading each of your lines Keep writing more of your poems Alovi

Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Mon 01/02/23 06:08 PM
Nice description of the rainy day Words with cogency Well script coherently Written concurrently Well done efficiently Thank you Vibes, I enjoy reading your poems.

Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Mon 01/02/23 06:09 PM
Lovely ❤, you've kindled the bliss of rain in me while reading each of your lines Keep writing more of your poems Alovi Thank you :)

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