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sitting alone at my piano
trying to finish this song but there’s no melody to the words i can’t see what am doing so wrong my fingers trip on the keys now, and all i can think of is you the words are hidden somewhere- in the pain and despair behind a window that hasn’t a view and tonight i’m gonna be lonely oh tonight i’m gonna be scared when I wake- i’ll be the only - survivor in a world that’s no longer there with a heart that’s seen its share of sadness and a million stories to tell i need something to halt all this madness `cause alone- i’m not doing so well i’m getting good at the art of deception lie to myself to get through only a few more hours to go now just to make it- one more night without you tonight i’m gonna be lonely yeah tonight it’s gonna be cold at night time passes so slowly but it has no problem making me old tonight is gonna be lonely tonight is gonna be sad tonight i’ll feed off of memories tonight that’s all that i have Kc08 |
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 Good write! 
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Ha! Finally someone who knows my pain. Well done, friend. Here's wishing you some inspiration.
Ry |
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Good write! thank you dear 
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Ha! Finally someone who knows my pain. Well done, friend. Here's wishing you some inspiration. Ry thank you sorry for your pain
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Thru the lies of deception we live and thrive,, Reminding our selves that life is awesome,, Yet feeling a pain deep within,, I know that pain,,, I also know that within thier is hope,,, Your words have given me a glimpse into your amazing soul,, I believe in my heart you my friend will find the calm in your heart and the touch of grace and beauty within the soul,,,
Remember when in life you feel down reach out your hand,,,, for on the other side you will find a loving hand to guide you home,, Hugs to you Love Mom
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sitting alone at my piano trying to finish this song but there’s no melody to the words i can’t see what am doing so wrong my fingers trip on the keys now, and all i can think of is you the words are hidden somewhere- in the pain and despair behind a window that hasn’t a view and tonight i’m gonna be lonely oh tonight i’m gonna be scared when I wake- i’ll be the only - survivor in a world that’s no longer there with a heart that’s seen its share of sadness and a million stories to tell i need something to halt all this madness `cause alone- i’m not doing so well i’m getting good at the art of deception lie to myself to get through only a few more hours to go now just to make it- one more night without you tonight i’m gonna be lonely yeah tonight it’s gonna be cold at night time passes so slowly but it has no problem making me old tonight is gonna be lonely tonight is gonna be sad tonight i’ll feed off of memories tonight that’s all that i have Kc08 Oh that's so sad, but good job. Were you drinking when you wrote that? Lol. Just kidding. |
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Edited by
kc0003
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Wed 01/16/08 01:34 PM
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Oh that's so sad, but good job. Were you drinking when you wrote that? Lol. Just kidding. lol... no i am not drinking i had to have something to counter the last one i wrote (metaphorically speaking) they can’t all have good messages people would think there is something wrong with me  |
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Thru the lies of deception we live and thrive,, Reminding our selves that life is awesome,, Yet feeling a pain deep within,, I know that pain,,, I also know that within thier is hope,,, Your words have given me a glimpse into your amazing soul,, I believe in my heart you my friend will find the calm in your heart and the touch of grace and beauty within the soul,,, Remember when in life you feel down reach out your hand,,,, for on the other side you will find a loving hand to guide you home,, Hugs to you Love Mom thanks mom you
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I really intended my comment as a joke, i hope no offense was taken. It does sound like something a country artist would compose, not that i have nothing against country music,it's actually one of my favorite types of music. I could definetly feel the pain. Good job
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i've been through enough pain in my life, so i can relate
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I really intended my comment as a joke, i hope no offense was taken. It does sound like something a country artist would compose, not that i have nothing against country music,it's actually one of my favorite types of music. I could definetly feel the pain. Good job none taken country music is the only kind i do not listen to though...lol |
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oh really! any favorites?
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KC, what a wonderful song, can't wait to hear the music to go with, if ever done and you post it to youtube, be sure to send me the link....
 Hug's Noden |
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noden
unfortunately i can’t write or play music i can get ¾ of the way through “moonlight sonata” but it ends there |
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noden unfortunately i can’t write or play music i can get ¾ of the way through “moonlight sonata” but it ends there Really, well what I saw, was a good place to start.... |
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KC, what a wonderful song, can't wait to hear the music to go with, if ever done and you post it to youtube, be sure to send me the link.... Hug's Noden Hey I'm with Noden on this one would love to hear it would make a great song indeed 
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Nicely done!
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thanks you two
if you know anyone that wants to put it to music i am for sale we all have a price
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thanks you two if you know anyone that wants to put it to music i am for sale we all have a price Well it could possibly be so, maybe check in with Songstress, wolfeyes, lovely gal, and see what they say....just an idea... |
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