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Edited by
Dragoness
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Fri 01/25/08 06:07 PM
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I really tried
We met on a sunny day you spoke in such a way to spark my interest in you so what would you do? We shared many fun times couldv'e got rich if we had the dimes for all time spent on the phone neither feelin alone It goes along like a song till that day when you had to say I love you love me? My world screeched to a halt as if someone had thrown salt why the hesitation? it is the expected destination There was something wrong I couldn't find the song I felt affection caring and dedication It goes along like a song till that day when you had to say I love you love me? Love, where was that love? we fit together like a glove It just isn't there Not because you did not care I cannot force it I cannot keep it We both cried Just know...I really tried bc 01/25/08 |
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 (((((((DRAGONESS)))))))) |
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wow.............awesome poem
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(((Dragoness)))
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very, very nice!
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 WHAT A GREAT POEM
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Thanks, snugs, flowers, msteddy, tsw, sexy, enya
I am glad you all enjoyed it.
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I cannot force it
I cannot keep it We both cried Just know...I really tried Ohhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,,, Love is so strange at times.... Hugs to you |
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I cannot force it I cannot keep it We both cried Just know...I really tried Ohhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,,, Love is so strange at times.... Hugs to you A very strange creature it is
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you're an amazing writer.. i can't even express how great that was.. send me some of that talent why don't you? >=[
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Very nice piece Dragoness
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Great.
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Slowly I find my personal favorites. Young lady, you are one. In fact, in my eyes, you seem a conglomerate of my faves: Denise, Kristi, Noden, and more..
keep it up my young Dragoness, sweet, penetrating flames jimmy |
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I can't find the words to say....kinda squeezes your heart like a vise. Ya touched something there.
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Thank you deadpoet, twitch, lonely, jim and faded
I am glad you enjoyed it. Your words are greatly appreciated.
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Marvelous read
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I cannot force it I cannot keep it We both cried Just know...I really tried Ohhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,,, Love is so strange at times.... Hugs to you A very strange creature it is It would help if it would just be flippin logical.....or is it logical when its what "real"? |
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I cannot force it I cannot keep it We both cried Just know...I really tried Ohhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,,, Love is so strange at times.... Hugs to you A very strange creature it is It would help if it would just be flippin logical.....or is it logical when its what "real"? Just some thoughts rambling through my mind again,,, Hope you dont mind (((( dragoness )))) Logical Love Hmmmmmmmmmmm lets ponder a bit Brought up in conversation Logical in one's mind Quite the other in another Real,,, A Fact,,, Permanent Immovable,,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm ponder again Logistics say Love shall come your way Patience and trust Brings on the Lustttttttttttt, ohhhhhhhhhh sorry Love....... In my Logistacal mind,,, My world Love is a creature Love is a word Kindles ones soul Mends ones heart Love is within me Love is within thy neighbor Love is,,, Just is I love you Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Easy said yet at times hard to believe Action shows Logic Logic scares my mind Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Love In My Mind In My Heart In My Soul In My Life Love,,, simple, hard, yet so overwhelming Takes my breathe away Returns it Love... Unconditional Love,,, Me first Love,,,, Born |
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I cannot force it I cannot keep it We both cried Just know...I really tried Ohhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,,, Love is so strange at times.... Hugs to you A very strange creature it is It would help if it would just be flippin logical.....or is it logical when its what "real"? Just some thoughts rambling through my mind again,,, Hope you dont mind (((( dragoness )))) Logical Love Hmmmmmmmmmmm lets ponder a bit Brought up in conversation Logical in one's mind Quite the other in another Real,,, A Fact,,, Permanent Immovable,,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm ponder again Logistics say Love shall come your way Patience and trust Brings on the Lustttttttttttt, ohhhhhhhhhh sorry Love....... In my Logistacal mind,,, My world Love is a creature Love is a word Kindles ones soul Mends ones heart Love is within me Love is within thy neighbor Love is,,, Just is I love you Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Easy said yet at times hard to believe Action shows Logic Logic scares my mind Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Love In My Mind In My Heart In My Soul In My Life Love,,, simple, hard, yet so overwhelming Takes my breathe away Returns it Love... Unconditional Love,,, Me first Love,,,, Born Very wonderful thoughts there. And no I do not mind at all.
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