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| Topic: Becoming What I Could Not Undertand | |
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I walked behind her in my youth
silently watching and taking in her every move The years passed by and it was all too clear to me the perfect vision I had of her was only a fantasy As I look into the stream of life it is not my reflection looking back at me It is my own dear mother's face that I now see |
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That is so sweet- and so true. Very well put,
You go girl!!! |
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WOW IS YOUR MOM AS HOT AS YOU ? :-)
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And I heard as it were the noise of thunder
One of the four beast sang come and see And I heard a voice in the midst of the four beasts And I looked and behold, a pale horse And it's name it said on him was Death And Hell followed with him. |
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Thank you...I have not even tried to write poetry in many years but
reading everyone's on here has inspired me to give it a go...and Spay...I am 40 and my mom is not a bad looking lady for 58...THANKS :) |
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hey Duckman? you quoting a bible?
good words HappyGirl!!! short but very sweet!!! |
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DEAR BRIGHT, VERY POWERFUL!!!!!!! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE! SEE YOU AROUND
THE POSTS, SOMETIMES. JUST ME, GREEN EYES |
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Duckman, I don't know you but I must ask...was what you just wrote just
a poem or some type of premonition? |
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he sounds like it comes from th apocalyps,th four horsemen...
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good poem bright/I really dig the whole fantasy vs reality imagery
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Very nice!! b_h_h.I am glad you have found inspiration.I would love to
hear more.Godspeed!Cybear |
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I hear the sound of hoofs,and loud panting sound.I look up just in time
to see smoke tendrils coming from the horse's nostrils.And I see two firey red eyes full of vengance.And to smoking pistols by the rider's side.Be careful Michael!Pleeeeease!! |
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riding on this Knights steed,
wanting all to feel my need, not for glory,not for greed, but for lone wolves need....M. |
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Just kidding with ya!Duckman,now let's get them heaters back in their
pouches.Peace!Cybear. |
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WELL MISS BRIGHT, YOUR WORDS HERE ARE OUT-OF-SITE,
AND MAY I PERSONALLY TELL YOU, I THINK YOUR SPIRIT HERE IS TRULLY 'GOD'S LIGHT!!!! WELCOME TO 'YOUR' WORLD....... |
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they were all nice
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Thank you everyone for the kind words...you guys are the best.
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Very Nice I like it.
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it's a really neat poem. thankfully you like your mother.LOL seriously
it's really sweet |
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hey bhh,good job.happy to see you here now too.im not a poet but given 2
weeks i could come up w 1.i will try when i have more time.you go girl! |
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