Topic: Silent Passion
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Wed 12/20/06 11:01 PM
Alone as all hell
in my cold room I wait
the things Id never tell
always confessed too late
those silent whispers
through prayers never sent
and soon i would miss her
more than I had ever meant

I love you like I have always wanted to
through you I see my life and I would die
to be with you
My every wish and every thought in my mind
could revolve around you a thousand times
I'm in love with you and only you


I feel your passion consume me
and your kiss brings me to life
I would sacrifice a thousand dreams
through you I fantasize
I feel your breath on my shoulder
is this what heaven could be
because I'm living in this paradise
everytime you come to me


michael1313's photo
Wed 12/20/06 11:37 PM
you are gonna melt her hert with this JT...lol...M.

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/20/06 11:38 PM
typo
hert=heart

Morena350's photo
Wed 12/20/06 11:41 PM
cool JT!!!!!!!!!

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Thu 12/21/06 02:40 AM
Ahh JT fine words there my friend fine words.

BillRoot's photo
Thu 12/21/06 04:27 AM
good job JT.wish i could express like that.

outboundforever's photo
Thu 12/21/06 05:39 AM
How you can come up these I will never know but I love reading your
work. Later.

V

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 12/21/06 08:13 AM
Awwww very sweet words they are!

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Thu 12/21/06 07:56 PM
thanks so much guys

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Thu 12/21/06 08:07 PM
JT u need to start a class to teach us all how to write that
way,,,,excellent job, well done!!!!!!!!!!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 12/22/06 06:48 PM
beautiful...
absolutely beatuiful...
wonderful magical words
that go straight to the heart...

iceprincess's photo
Fri 12/22/06 07:03 PM
that was so pretty baby i cried again damn you.LOL

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Fri 12/22/06 07:08 PM
Im just full of it,aren't I.....LOL

Cybear's photo
Fri 12/22/06 07:10 PM
Heck Ya!Another awesome one JT.Love your Poetry bro,keep them coming
please.This is the most precious way for us all to express ourselves.Not
to mention it allows us to vent our feelings and perhaps even bring
closure sometimes in our life.Amen!Godspeed!Cybear:)