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iceprincess's photo
Sat 12/23/06 09:24 PM
I hear the sound of silvery laughter
Coming to me over the passsages of time
I hearthe sound of childrens prattle
Floating through the tunnels of my mind

I'm locked up in my cell of darkness
With no way ever to get out
I cry out for the world to hear me
But no hears my silent cry of help

I reach out for a hand to guide me
Clutching air, for noones there
I realize i'm alone in silence
no sound heard no ones aware

I silently stew within my madness
to the outside nothing is wrong
Appearences so decieving
As within i die alone



12/23/06

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 12/23/06 09:31 PM
I have been there, if only this was a dream, then we could wake up from
it.

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/23/06 09:41 PM
I cry this same tear every day...
good writing...M.

Cybear's photo
Sat 12/23/06 10:44 PM
WOW!!Ice,you are awesome girl.I almost felt like I was deeply engrossed
in a Dean Koontz novel.Please keep the poetry coming hon.Unbelievably
riveting.Godspeed!Cybear

**Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year,IcePrincess**

iceprincess's photo
Sat 12/23/06 10:49 PM
thanks you guys i haven't really written in a while last time i did it
caused me lots of problems so we'll try this again.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 12/23/06 10:57 PM
Makes us wish it was a dream
then we know we would wake up soon.

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sun 12/24/06 03:47 AM
Coodo's sis, your finally writing as u did before. I'm proud of u.