Topic: Saturday Night in Phoenix
no photo
Thu 02/28/08 10:06 AM
It's a dark mecca,
a seething underground
of reptilian figures
disguised
as suburbanites
with money to spend
on slick fast cars
expensive bars
and restaurants ....

Bleached blond
women with
over amped smiles
and too much make up
working their wiles
for that next line
so white
so fine
Just a little hit
yeah that's it
a little somethin'
to do her up right ...

A bright light
in a dark night
in a dark town
covered in a filmy dust
guaranteed to
heighten
sharpen
and enlighten
the senses so frail...
The smell of
desperation
lingering in
the air
and money
to burn
changing hands
in rapid shot gun fire
time ...
... yeah ...

1:00 am comes
round and there's
no slowing down
too much going on
too many lonely bodies
exchanging dangers
with strangers
unknown
Anything
and everything
to bring
that human touch
once so tender
and real
now nothing but
translucent memories
lost
and burnt up
by their back
alley sins ...

Yeah its....
another Saturday night
fading into
another Sunday morning
so empty and bleak
and another six days
before the sad
and lonely
can shine
and parade
while seeking
another lost night
filled with
pharmaceutical hopes
and dreams
efficiently
manufactured
in the hot desert
sands ...
Just for this
special night alone ...

Oh yes ...
Saturday night
In Phoenix.
Bring plenty of cash.
You'll need it.







no photo
Thu 02/28/08 10:07 AM

It's a dark mecca,
a seething underground
of reptilian figures
disguised
as suburbanites
with money to spend
on slick fast cars
expensive bars
and restaurants ....

Bleached blond
women with
over amped smiles
and too much make up
working their wiles
for that next line
so white
so fine
Just a little hit
yeah that's it
a little somethin'
to do her up right ...

A bright light
in a dark night
in a dark town
covered in a filmy dust
guaranteed to
heighten
sharpen
and enlighten
the senses so frail...
The smell of
desperation
lingering in
the air
and money
to burn
changing hands
in rapid shot gun fire
time ...
... yeah ...

1:00 am comes
round and there's
no slowing down
too much going on
too many lonely bodies
exchanging dangers
with strangers
unknown
Anything
and everything
to bring
that human touch
once so tender
and real
now nothing but
translucent memories
lost
and burnt up
by their back
alley sins ...

Yeah its....
another Saturday night
fading into
another Sunday morning
so empty and bleak
and another six days
before the sad
and lonely
can shine
and parade
while seeking
another lost night
filled with
pharmaceutical hopes
and dreams
efficiently
manufactured
in the hot desert
sands ...
Just for this
special night alone ...

Oh yes ...
Saturday night
In Phoenix.
Bring plenty of cash.
You'll need it.








Yeah...scottsdale too

no photo
Thu 02/28/08 10:07 AM


It's a dark mecca,
a seething underground
of reptilian figures
disguised
as suburbanites
with money to spend
on slick fast cars
expensive bars
and restaurants ....

Bleached blond
women with
over amped smiles
and too much make up
working their wiles
for that next line
so white
so fine
Just a little hit
yeah that's it
a little somethin'
to do her up right ...

A bright light
in a dark night
in a dark town
covered in a filmy dust
guaranteed to
heighten
sharpen
and enlighten
the senses so frail...
The smell of
desperation
lingering in
the air
and money
to burn
changing hands
in rapid shot gun fire
time ...
... yeah ...

1:00 am comes
round and there's
no slowing down
too much going on
too many lonely bodies
exchanging dangers
with strangers
unknown
Anything
and everything
to bring
that human touch
once so tender
and real
now nothing but
translucent memories
lost
and burnt up
by their back
alley sins ...

Yeah its....
another Saturday night
fading into
another Sunday morning
so empty and bleak
and another six days
before the sad
and lonely
can shine
and parade
while seeking
another lost night
filled with
pharmaceutical hopes
and dreams
efficiently
manufactured
in the hot desert
sands ...
Just for this
special night alone ...

Oh yes ...
Saturday night
In Phoenix.
Bring plenty of cash.
You'll need it.








Yeah...scottsdale too



So I hear...

otterman's photo
Thu 02/28/08 12:13 PM
f@#kin awesome write
sounds like detroit as well

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Thu 02/28/08 12:27 PM
bravo, great write:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/28/08 01:31 PM
Good write on reality! flowerforyou
(((MsWizard)))

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Thu 02/28/08 01:34 PM

f@#kin awesome write
sounds like detroit as well


Thank you Otterman...I appreciate the comment! flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 02/28/08 01:35 PM

bravo, great write:smile:

Awww thank you pkd (((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))) :heart:

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Thu 02/28/08 01:35 PM

Good write on reality! flowerforyou
(((MsWizard)))


((((((((((TEDDY)))))))))))) Thank you sugar! :heart:

s1owhand's photo
Thu 02/28/08 01:47 PM
after the purple sunset and nocturnal rides
begin and end their faceless troll

flowerforyou

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Thu 02/28/08 01:51 PM

after the purple sunset and nocturnal rides
begin and end their faceless troll

flowerforyou


Once again with two lines you lay me out flat...awesome s1ow!! ((((s1ow)))))))) :heart: