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Topic: Steel
Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sun 03/16/08 05:59 PM
If I am going to feel pushed aside & unheard: I will step back. If I step back: You will know it. If you know it: Dont question it. If you do not question it: I can work through it. If I work through it: I can forge feelings of steel. If I have feelings of steel: Then you would not inadvertantly hurt Me. StormMessages 3162008

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/16/08 06:04 PM
Deeply, deeply touching. insightful, with a wonderful build to the ending... Thank you Storm.

thumbelinakat Joined Fri 10/19/07 Posts: 260	Sun 03/16/08 06:10 PM
beautiful

Twitch Joined Thu 09/27/07 Posts: 6199	Sun 03/16/08 06:11 PM
Storm -- excellent

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sun 03/16/08 06:12 PM
(((Storm)))

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 03/16/08 06:20 PM


EarthSprite Joined Mon 04/02/07 Posts: 12114	Sun 03/16/08 07:53 PM
(((storm)))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 03/16/08 08:14 PM
If I am going to feel pushed aside & unheard: I will step back. If I step back: You will know it. If you know it: Dont question it. If you do not question it: I can work through it. If I work through it: I can forge feelings of steel. If I have feelings of steel: Then you would not inadvertantly hurt Me. StormMessages 3162008 ((((( Storm ))))) Deeply moving my love ,,,

iwsteel Joined Fri 11/16/07 Posts: 909	Mon 03/17/08 12:29 PM
nice storm... ironic u posted that on my birthday....and about forging hearts... i think mines drop forged....but yet , still , tender..............melt it

jayf81974 Joined Sun 01/13/08 Posts: 241	Mon 03/17/08 12:31 PM
very nice storm

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Mon 03/17/08 12:44 PM
nod Thank You~

lizethmarina Joined Thu 12/20/07 Posts: 229	Mon 03/17/08 12:46 PM
Awesome write

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