Topic: Inner War
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Sun 01/07/07 08:22 AM

Demons and monsters once roamed my inner being
Fighting and warring constantly
Many battles
Many casualties
And the war raged on
Almost killing my soul
Almost killing me
Through the cracks
A weak sunlight shined through
Pushing away the demons
Killing the monsters
I fought back to save me
To save my soul
A courageous battle ensued
The war was not over but the major battle won
Small skirmishes occur every now and then
But I am strong
And vanquish all demons
I have survived
I can begin again

karmafury's photo
Sun 01/07/07 08:34 AM
A fine start you've made. If you need an extra swordarm I'm not that
hard to find.

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 01/07/07 08:56 AM
As one of the survivers who carry on, smile as you walk throught those
gates and be with your wizard.

:)

G

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Sun 01/07/07 09:05 AM
Keep on kickin th poop out of all them Bad dudes,,,lol
great poem Miss Poet!!!!!!

Hello karma, how ya been??

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Sun 01/07/07 09:25 AM
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Awwwwww just a little help for the demons that are left
I leave with you a sword in order to fight what might
still be lurking around the corners of life. :)

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 01/07/07 11:38 AM
A Knight to fight I may not be
but words of wisdom I give freely
this battle may be neverending
just remember that a friend I can be
to lift you up when you are down
a shoulder to lean on
when youre too weak to stand
to listen when no one's around
and always reaching out
with a helping hand
the demons you fight,
are with me too
just keep them at bay
and your soul will be saved

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Sun 01/07/07 12:06 PM
Hi Chubbycherubpoet!

Just a note: like Sweetcountrygirl there are many of us just trying to
reach out and help somebody, trying to make a connection. Iv'e read
alot on this sight, and your poems bless everyone, even me. Thanks!!!

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Sun 01/07/07 12:08 PM
Just remember, be caught up in the swirl of Love,
drift into the singularity,and never leave it.

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 01/07/07 12:16 PM
another good poem from my big sis.:D

Morena350's photo
Sun 01/07/07 12:18 PM
yes it is another good one, yeyyyyyyyy!!CCP

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Tue 01/09/07 05:38 AM
Thanks every one :)