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You came today
Sayin you came to visit the dog Told me how she broke your heart Now you're lookin for a brand new start I offer words of comfort Tell you that when its right You'll know it Then I joke about who the hell am I to give advice You laugh Give me a hug Tell m I am wiser then I know Then you ask me What happened?? Where did we go wrong?? I say I don't know We were kids then Too scared to act on feelings Saying we were just friends We were inseperable Through good times and bad Yet we couldn't see What was right in front of us When I walked away Got my self married Had a kid You told me he wasn't right I didn't listen That was nothing new You walked away Went on with your life Always looking for that perfect wife So many years later And here we are Back at the beginning Still friends You ask me now if we can try I tell you of my Wizard And start to cry I look at you and ask you why Why didn't you ask when we were kids Why didn't you say how you felt You have no answer now As you had none then You tell me if he's not the one I don't have to look so far That you'll be waiting... |
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Thanks CCp...enjoyed this one...
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CCP .... sent a chill down my spine ... and thats good :)...
I could have inserted my name in there anywhwere.... thx it was a pleasure to read ... :) |
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CCP, your words are always so beautiful
a reflection of you!! Simply beautiful... Thnaks |
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wow is all i can say c.c. i can identify with this poem .good work sis
keep em coming. |
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thanks yall :)
still no title for this one, not sure what to call it..any suggestions? |
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Very good Poet.
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This is now titled Unseen and Unknown, thanks Karma :)
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Your welcome Poet.
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WOW simply WOW, hummm when it rains it pours.
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No words can express the feelings in this poem.
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