Topic: Broken Heart
hellocutie21's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:21 PM
Hey guys. Here's a poem that I was hesistant to post at first...


Being with out you,
leaves my heart empty.
You were a piece of me-
that is now missing
Thoughts and memories of you
depresses me and bring me to tears-
good times and that orrccured through the years,
as well as what should have happened
and shouldn't have stays with me.
You've given me so much pleasure,
but yet caused me so much pain
I wish I were over you,
but memories of you still remain.

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:23 PM
<<<<<Puddle of tears....that touched me, deeply! That is BEAUTIFUL!
GREAT WORK!

hellocutie21's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:30 PM
Thanks. It came straight from the heart.

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 07:35 PM
Will...I wished I had wrote those words...BEAUTIFUL as you are, gal!

Cybear's photo
Mon 01/08/07 08:21 PM
Beautiful words hon.There are no finer words,then those straight from
the heart.Is Poetry not fantastic or what?"I Love It"Oh Yeah!very nice
to meet you also.Godspeed!Cybear.
p.s.Welcome to the JSH ;)and I'll see you in the forums.

hellocutie21's photo
Mon 01/08/07 10:40 PM
Thanks Dreamweaverangel and Cyberbear. I might post other poems up soon.
Yes, poetry is beautiful indeed.

sherrie0527's photo
Mon 01/08/07 11:03 PM
well there u go cutie u said sstright from mine! that was great!

karmafury's photo
Mon 01/08/07 11:23 PM
That was great. Thank you.

catchme_ifucan's photo
Mon 01/08/07 11:42 PM
too kewl cutie!