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The Art of Subtlety
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Well, I guess the "answer" here won't be directness  
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The Art of Subtlety
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got this from wikipedia: Henry Charles Bukowski, was a German American poet, novelist, and short story writer. Bukowski's writing was heavily influenced by the geography and atmosphere of his home city of Los Angeles, and is marked by an emphasis on... en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Bukowski - 76k - Cached soooo--was your excerpt a poem? novel? or a short story? hmmmm the community is called "poems & creative writing" though? like two seperate things......see my point? I think you failed to see mine. That's ok. It's all good. |
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Interim
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~ INTERIM ~ The storm has quieted for now. The air is clear, and I hear the birds singing again through my open bay windows. This one dove, I wish I knew what he is saying. What is he relaying? Or maybe he's just playing. Perhaps he is praying. Nonetheless, I hear him. The cool air enters the room. I am consumed by its movement, yet too by some stillness. There is nothing missed when kissed by Love's existence. My heart open, listening for that vibration of Truth that knew me in my youth, and even more so now. The energy so soft, I bow, allowing a part of me to be touched like never before. Transformation at my core. I am soaring. I am opening. I am not the same. It starts to rain, once more. I listen to nature pouring out its Soul, consoling the deepest need, releasing what is seen, releasing what is unseen. ~© JDS 06/14/2009~ you soar high angelface, may you continue so soar~ 
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in memory....
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granny you had given a room of laughter, smiles as where you would light up a room when you would enter, you had a soft heart and soul, where you shared everything in all your might, we all shared several things from you. the soft hugs and kisses you gave each one of us and the memories that would never be forgotten. now granny you have crossed over the golden gate and won your wings to keep, and the angels guiding your way with no pain to no end. grandpa once again has you in his arms to keep, as we know you are watching from above and giving us the extra strenght in the family..... she left behind 28 grandchildren, 45 great-grandchildren, and six great-great-grandchildren.(and rejoin with) Her husband of 61 years, Fern; her son, Roland; grandson, Eric, and sister, June preceded her in death. Now THAT is a life worth celebrating Queene. A lovely tribute~ |
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america america
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america america home of the brave america america where the roads are paved with gold america america land of the free america america is none of these Learn and know your audience~Tom is right~ |
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the him that makes her
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How sad she is waiting worrying for her Mr. Right to make everything appear all right NOW knowing no other good night without him a friend once said to this head "maybe its her" whom when questioned knows nothing she is guilty guilty as she by appearance used as a dress now on clearance Worried She waits up late furious her finger nails tap faster they tap cursing crushing on her ego she caps flustered her lips unbitten since snap i cant remember that far back for she wants her wants and NEEDS her needs knowing her wants him really what she NEEDS snap i take that all back she wants her Mr. Rightnow You rocked that one! Last few lines in particular~great~ |
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The Art of Subtlety
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the dirty dogs of Akron are everywhere
I see them everywhere in movies in other cities of the world but I've seen the whores of Hamburg only once they stand like eternal beings waiting of course they are not eternal and they were standing in the rain the whores of Hamburg were standing in the rain waiting to feed upon that thing in man which is not quite satisfied with anything waiting for men who are lookin for what has been lost having a woman without pain for either the man or the woman the whores of Hamburg leaning against the fenders of parked cars in the rain were a symphony to me~ from a distance closer up I knew there woulod be trouble and terrible failure if not pain and there they stood in bad weather lines of them waiting the dirty dogs of Akron are everywhere but the whores of Hamburg were beautiful that day charles bukowski Now THAT is creative writing. |
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The Art of Subtlety
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Life is what you make of it. Yes it may be. However we all walk around daily and wonder why we cant get along with the people we meet. I am showing you why as we speak. It is because no one is subtle any more and everyone assumes that we mean one thing. The art of expression is meaningless and has no true queen. We all roam day to day wondering, "What, oh what did he or she say?" All of us want answers with no clue yet we all pray. My answer to this, is as simple as three letters. We all need to remember that honesty has no definition. We render its condition. Unfortunately in today's society we all expect so much that we have no sense of the subtle. Because life is out of touch. And that, is creative writing. In whatever sense "Mingle" wanted us to use this forum for unless we were writing poetry. My answer to the question was "spoken" but not written-- hence creative writing. This was your definition of "creative writing"? Ok. |
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~ 'night, Mother ~ (rev)
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Beautifully touching...  Hi Ainjel, thank you so much! xoxo
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~ 'night, Mother ~ (rev)
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(((((((Hugs))))))) girlie Thank you sweet carol
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The Awakening (rev jun 2009)
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I like when you send my mind in a frenzy Ms Wiz  Hello darlin', how are you? I've got a few more in the worlds..I'll have to frenzy you on up a bit more~grin~
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The Awakening (rev jun 2009)
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There was a time I sleep-walked in Dreamy Drowsy eyed Innocence Anesthetized To the pleasures Of the flesh My thoughts pure Pristine My body Untouched Celibate Yet wanting Then you with Dark eyes Hungry Wanting Came along Your slow Seductive smile Mesmerizing Charming me All the while Insidiously Inserting yourself Into my chaste fortress Slowly Maneuvering deeply into My sequestered privacy Your gentle yet firm Battering ram artful in stealthy intuition Bringing dormant Desires to fruition Over and over again Taking aim on an Unarmed woman Pounding Awakening Senses newly Heightened Enlightened Sparked into a Blazing inferno Your passions Flowing lava hot Searing silken skin You burst thru My closed doors and I Welcomed You in Glorying in New found Raptures Excited Invited Given hospitality Into warm Communion Our passionate union Awash in fluid Hungers Satiated Placated and Contented by My liberator Rousing me From doe-eyed Slumber And now awake …. … I slumber no more … awh@2007 The awakening rev june 2009 Lovely MzWizard lovely... Thank you Em~
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A REAL MAN....
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1.) A REAL MAN respects his mother and places his family first. 2.) A REAL MAN RAISES HIS KIDS, not JUST out of pocket either. 3.) A REAL MAN supports his woman to develop herself. 4.) A REAL MAN doesn't worry about what others depict as a real man. Walk in his shoes first and then tell him what makes him A REAL MAN. 5.) A REAL MAN doesn't Break Promises 6.) A REAL MAN calls you beautiful, not hot, sexy, or fine as ****. 8.) A REAL MAN CALLS YOU on a daily basis - NO MATTER HOW BUSY OR TIRED HE IS. 9.) A REAL MAN looks past what he's heard about you or what his friends think of you. 10.) A REAL MAN wants to spend as much time as he can with you & won't get sick of you. 11.) A REAL MAN comes over just to watch movies with you. 12.) A REAL MAN kisses you on the forehead just because. 13.) A REAL MAN doesn't tell you what he thinks you want to hear. He tells you what's real. 14.) A REAL MAN should be treated like one. 15.) A REAL MAN doesn't ask questions when you say you need something....him, sex, money, or a bed to sleep in. 16.) A REAL MAN lets others know How He Feels About you. 17.) A REAL MAN doesn't play games!!!!!!!!!!! 18.) A REAL MAN doesn't leave you to go and hang out with his friends if he hasn't seen you in a week and then call you at 4 in the morning because he needs some loving. 19.) A REAL MAN doesn't deny you. 20.) A REAL MAN doesn't just think about sex. 21.) A REAL MAN Doesn't Judge the book by the cover. 22.) A REAL MAN wouldn't use his friendship card to get what he wants. 23.) A REAL MAN knows the difference between a REAL WOMAN and a random girl. 24.) A REAL MAN won't degrade a woman with words nor will he ever put his hands on her in anger. 25.) A REAL MAN sends you flowers Just Because. A REAL man would never be able to meet all of these standards. A REAL man is far more REAL. |
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The Awakening (rev jun 2009)
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There was a time
I sleep-walked in Dreamy Drowsy eyed Innocence Anesthetized To the pleasures Of the flesh My thoughts pure Pristine My body Untouched Celibate Yet wanting Then you with Dark eyes Hungry Wanting Came along Your slow Seductive smile Mesmerizing Charming me All the while Insidiously Inserting yourself Into my chaste fortress Slowly Maneuvering deeply into My sequestered privacy Your gentle yet firm Battering ram artful in stealthy intuition Bringing dormant Desires to fruition Over and over again Taking aim on an Unarmed woman Pounding Awakening Senses newly Heightened Enlightened Sparked into a Blazing inferno Your passions Flowing lava hot Searing silken skin You burst thru My closed doors and I Welcomed You in Glorying in New found Raptures Excited Invited Given hospitality Into warm Communion Our passionate union Awash in fluid Hungers Satiated Placated and Contented by My liberator Rousing me From doe-eyed Slumber And now awake …. … I slumber no more … awh@2007 The awakening rev june 2009 |
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~ 'night, Mother ~ (rev)
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 Beautiful! Thank you LilyPetal~
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~ 'night, Mother ~ (rev)
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(((MsWizard))) (((TEDDY))) Thank you sweet girl~ Thank you Gossipmpm~ AngelFace, I will whisper until there is no more to whisper~ xoxox Denise, my precious, I love you~ GorgeousGurl, are you ok sweetheart? Email me, you are loved ~
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Mon 06/08/09 06:41 AM
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Why do I allow you To walk away You do your best To make me betray Is this your master plan What makes you this way All I have ever done Is love the games you play Why must you be so cruel and insecure Can you not let me go And remove the lure Why is it so hard for you to be sure All of this time I just want the cure **edited** Creativity is like beauty~it's all subjective. The real question here is do YOU think it's creative? Is it original? Does it say what want it to say? Is it a thought that's relatable? Is it something that you are thoroughly satisfied with? If you have completed the task you set out on, then you are the only one that needs to answer these questions, yes? |
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~ 'night, Mother ~ (rev)
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fade to scene 2.... I'd like to hold on scene 2 for a while.... |
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first night (rev)
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missed you (((A))) (((HENRY))) I've been editing for what seems like forever! I'll be around a little more~how are you darlin'?
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Topic:
“Surprise”
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Adorable write and a nightmare come true. I remember having that same thing happen to me. I had no robe, I was wearing a big Elvis T shirt and panties. That's it. Awkward to say the least!
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