MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
QUOTE: "i like that"
and i like YOU
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
ODE TO CHELSEA
Good Morning Chelsea, from Joni Mitchell
Woke up, it was a chelsea morning, and the first thing that I heard Was a song outside my window, and the traffic wrote the words It came a-reeling up like christmas bells, and rapping up like pipes and drums Oh, wont you stay Well put on the day And well wear it till the night comes Woke up, it was a chelsea morning, and the first thing that I saw Was the sun through yellow curtains, and a rainbow on the wall Blue, red, green and gold to welcome you, crimson crystal beads to beckon Oh, wont you stay Well put on the day Theres a sun show every second Now the curtain opens on a portrait of today And the streets are paved with passersby And pigeons fly And papers lie Waiting to blow away Woke up, it was a chelsea morning, and the first thing that I knew There was milk and toast and honey and a bowl of oranges, too And the sun poured in like butterscotch and stuck to all my senses Oh, wont you stay Well put on the day And well talk in present tenses When the curtain closes and the rainbow runs away I will bring you incense owls by night By candlelight By jewel-light If only you will stay Pretty baby, wont you Wake up, its a chelsea morning |
MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
A Mere Child
This makes me sick. Not your exceptionally well written poem, but the topic matter. I commend you for taking this horrific topic and bringing it to our attention. We humans have a tendency to look the other way. It's terrible.
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
QUOTE:
<<grinning back and hugging all her friends that took the time to read this! I must admit I was SOooo excited!!!!! <<doing the happy feet dance>>>
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
Knowing My Place
Your place in embedded in your incredible talent and confidence darling. Get used to it. *smile*
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
QUOTE: Beautifully written always have enjoyed your work...
And I always love seeing your lovely smile! How you be Kristi my lamb???
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
Tammy-This is Why I Write
QUOTE: is that an olive branch? or are you just happy.... That is my way of saying Life is a garden filled with the flowers of friendship. That is my way of saying, Im not too proud to take a hand that is proferred to me. That is my way of saying if you want to learn I will help and you will help me. That's why we are here. to HELP and to LISTEN. Now come ere you big ol KC thing you an give wizzie a hug. |
MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
Only
They are with you in every word you write. They are immortal
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
Tammy-This is Why I Write
I write because
I’ve got the need To bleed and it’s oh So messy To mar and scar Someone’s floor Especially When they’ve Taken such pains To keep it Clean Sterile Undefiled Pristine …. And I’m Such … …a messy girl… My mind constantly In a whirl A mental Hemophiliac In an anemic world … Bleeding out Emotions Sullied Tainted Septic In a world Overcome With uncaring Antiseptic Thinking… I write because The look in my eyes Would never disguise The wounds I hide behind My words Scattered Behind me Baited breath Left as a Lure for The curious To follow … My own little Trail of Mystery … I write because I’m taking My stand My fist held high Screaming THIS is who I am ...THIS is who I’ve been .....THIS is who and what I want to be So if you can’t Take me With all my Tears Fears Smiles And sorrows Than Don’t … …take me… ……at all… NOW you know Why I write … Feb 14 2009 <<<------reaching out and taking Tammy's hand. I cannot ask for that which Im not willing to give myself, yes?
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
Thank you Davey.
Sadie, I will hold you to it
MM, ty
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
http://edgarallanpoet.com/Announcements.php
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
As I said Em, they will know who to bring~
bring your beautiful smile and your desire to learn and listen~
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
You will know where to find me. Bring PK, Sharris, KC, D4, Wench, Argurl, etc. You will know who to bring.
xoxoxo |
MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
QUOTE: You are more than a Woman You are strength the light in the darkness my pilar of strength my answers to my fears my sister, my confidant you are Love
And you are not only one of the best poets I've been gifted to know, but one of the best friends I've been gifted to have~
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
QUOTE: thanks darling ...puts me in just the right mood
Always ready to oblige my friend !
Thank you so much Mystique!
Maleah, I try darlin', but like all writers EVERY DAY is a growing and learning period and I'm NEVER too proud to say I need to learn more! xoxoxo
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
I Am Alicia
Thank you so much Holly, it is greatly appreciated~
kalunda, I haven't seen you for a while, how are you dear?
Mystique how pretty are your feet! Thank you!
Kc, you are my precious friend!
Wonderwench,Fire Opals are one of my favorite stones! What a lovely compliment!
PK, I love you dearling~
MzEm,thank you lovely~
Edited by MsWizard on Thu 08/13/09 08:57 AM
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
my secret pain...
QUOTE: Thanks for more of your input It is noted and taken into consideration. Haha Now I'm gonna go run Then do a write on running Cause that's just me I love you. You make me laugh Tammy
And you make me sad. Why dont you do a piece on your next bowl movement? How about baking cookies? Hey, did it sprinkle in your next of the woods? That can be an expect piece! It's fairly pathetic when a woman such as yourself floods these forum with enormously poor work and tells everybody how tremendous talented she is. Good lord. How delusional. I cannog for the life of me wonder why on earh nobody has been kind enough or friend enough to you to tell you that this is never going to work for you. Well, whatever it takes to get you thru your day <<pats Gossipgirl on her head placatingly>> |
MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
my secret pain...
Maleah, you are in my thoughts...you and your little one...
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MsWizard
Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5425 |
Topic:
my secret pain...
QUOTE: We have very diff writing styles you and me You don't like mine. That's ok. To you they are random thoughts I enjoy yours. Would never be critical to you. I have no need to Love to you Tammy
She's right. They are random thoughts. They say absolutely nothing. They are as random as, "Hmmm, maybe I'll go for a run today" and then they're thrown out on the forum over and over and over, one random thought after another. You dont "write". You just verbalize your random thoughts. Maleah is right. If you actually sad down, didn't say a word for a few hours, gathered these random thoughts, you might actually have something to say. Think about it. |
