Topic: Time Passes
Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:25 AM

As time passes, we move on,
Thoughts of you, loving long.
Time spent together in life,
Cannot help, carry strife.

Thinking now, loving before,
Settled down, locked door.
To my love, to my life,
Locked inside, bitter strife.

When locked, deep inside,
Staying strong, emotions hide.
Within life, without a friend,
Living lonely, to the end.

While dieing, without me,
Please look, look and see.
As you were, my love, my life,
Remember me, you were my wife.

Now this man, his written words,
Hear them now, these giant verbs.
Share your life, your giving soul,
Love’s shared, my only goal.

Caring love, caring life,
Giving love, without strife.
Now feeling, love begin,
Freeing you, my Love within.

Carry you, lands of gold,
Carried now, been foretold.
Carry you, throughout the night,
Carried dreams, into the light.

Carry love, within your dreams,
Carried pain, forever screams.
Carry life, into the light,
Carried now, from dark of night.

Carry Love, from me to you,
Carried love, in all you do.
Carry this, forgotten dream,
Carried love, never scream.

As you see these words of bliss,
Love for me, we’ll never miss.
He will love you as a friend,
Love for you will never end.

Feelings found, for a friend,
Sorrows shared, words to lend.
Hold my dreams, in the night,
Carry my screams, into the light.

Go my love, love this life.
Fear no more, become a wife.
Go to him, from dark of night,
Carry our love, into the light.

Now this bard does tell a story,
Tales of love, not for Glory.
For a friend who lost her love,
Words given from high above.

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:30 AM
nice work Gryphynsmokin

have you peeked in one of my dreams again?huh

got goosebumps when I read thissmokin

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:56 AM
Simply beautiful;Grypyhn.Another masterpiece woven.May God provide
strength and endurance to those broken hearted and weakened from lost or
broken relationships or marriages for the pain and depth of these
feelings harbored are virtually indescribable.But Gryphyn our dear poet
weaves in hope and perseverance generously provided through true and
unconditional love and friendship.Thx!G.Godspeed!Cybearglasses

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 08:35 AM
Real nice work Gryphyn. Beautifully written.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 08:54 AM
Beautiful!:heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:20 AM
As always G beautiful :heart:

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:21 AM


Sweet

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:19 AM
Thank you all for the kind words. One of these days I might just post
the poems and to who I wrote them for. Maybe, just one of these days.


drinker laugh bigsmile smooched

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Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 05:08 PM
I don't think she will ever see this if it hits the next page.blushing

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creationsfire's photo
Sat 02/17/07 06:45 PM
I think she saw, and she would be a fool to not be touched to her very
soul.

Fireflowerforyou :heart:

venusrose's photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:11 PM
Very beautiful.
Hope she has read it too.flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:14 PM
:heart: smokin drinker Kick butt, Mr. G,,,good one,smokin

LAMom's photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:15 PM
Beautiful :heart:

okieangel's photo
Sat 02/17/07 08:03 PM
smooched nice one G
But then everything you write has heart and soul in it

Morena350's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:48 PM
Hoping to read some words of wisdom,
a message perhaps, from up above
or from someone who heard my cry
and understand the way I feel and why
my friends do, and this I know
I feel the love they have for me
then came a poet with mighty strenth and might
and wrote the words that made me cry:cry:
and understood the message that he wrote for me
I feel so special, thank you G..flowerforyou flowerforyou
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:51 PM
Your Very Welcome:heart: smooched blushing flowerforyou

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Morena350's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:51 PM
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:00 PM
The words I write are from a gift on high. I am guided in my writing as
I am in my life. May God Bless my Friends and Family, and may my words
be guidance for those in need.

:heart: flowerforyou blushing

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Morena350's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:11 PM
Don't ever stop writing G...flowerforyou flowerforyou