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Topic: Broken Distance, Broken Heart
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 08/23/08 07:42 AM
Broken Distance, Broken Heart So many miles away from you It just doesn't seem fair, A long distance love in time I am here, you are there. If love tugs at the heart The way it has done mine, The shortest distance between two hearts Is a straight line. Broken distance, broken heart Does destiny have a plan? To bring our two hearts together So I can be your man? Is this true love I feel Or is it that beautiful smile, That captured my heart Way across the miles? As I sit back and ponder If this was meant to be, One day, our paths will cross We'll just have to see. But keep me in your thoughts Our journey will never part, With love, comes patience With this broken distance, and broken heart.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 08/24/08 09:22 PM
I know in my Heart your Heart will find all it desire's,, You my friend are filled with such emotion,, your soul pure,,, Kiss's Beautiful

liltazz Joined Tue 07/29/08 Posts: 217	Mon 08/25/08 03:58 AM
WOW!!!! When you find the one she will be the luckiest woman.

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Mon 08/25/08 08:23 AM Edited by flame1cutie on Mon 08/25/08 08:25 AM
Thank you, that says it all for me right now I changed on word to woman instead of man

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 08/25/08 08:48 AM
Robert- never give up on your dreams...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 08/25/08 09:00 AM
Thank you ladies very much...just something I know that everyone feels on long distance relationships.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 08/25/08 09:14 AM
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Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Mon 08/25/08 09:42 AM


BrooklineBaby Joined Sun 04/27/08 Posts: 469	Mon 08/25/08 11:00 AM
KUDOS Robert ---- I believe you have touched the heart of everyone on this site who has found love that is tortured by unfortunate distance.........and have given them all hope that with patience, if meant to be....will come.... Absolutely beautiful and heartfelt..

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 08/25/08 05:10 PM
Thank you Angel, Gypsy and Micky...I appreciate the comments and no need to feel sad. Not about me...just sharing what others feel as well.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 08/26/08 06:10 AM
Very nice

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 08/26/08 10:23 AM
Thank you Angel, Gypsy and Micky...I appreciate the comments and no need to feel sad. Not about me...just sharing what others feel as well. Yes, but you deserve a little TLC....we all need that at times

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Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 08/26/08 03:41 PM
Thank you Angel, Gypsy and Micky...I appreciate the comments and no need to feel sad. Not about me...just sharing what others feel as well. Yes, but you deserve a little TLC....we all need that at times Thank you sweetie...I do...but no one close by to give it.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Tue 08/26/08 04:45 PM
Excellent write very insightful...

DTHRomeo Joined Wed 06/20/07 Posts: 43387	Tue 08/26/08 05:07 PM
Nice writing bro

scotty1964 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 10197	Tue 08/26/08 05:28 PM
ahhhhhhhhhh sweeeeeeeeet....... hey romeo...where is the what we are listening to know thread at........im listening to such a good tune............ good job on that poem bro..........

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 08/26/08 05:30 PM
Thank you gentleman, glad you liked it.