Topic: A Thousand Tears
mig25's photo
Thu 03/04/10 02:13 PM
A Thousand Tears


Burning
through the cold darkness
with only the warmth
of a thousand tears
is this what loneliness feels like?

My soul aches for another time
when I was a reflection of your joy
when the rain was a reason to make love
and not wallow in the emptiness
of a thousand tears

I close my eyes
and run as far and as fast as I can
yet I’m still here
alone
drowning within a thousand tears

Time passes
though I have yet to move
the world seems to have forgotten me;
just as well
I’m not ready to swim the river of another thousand tears





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Thu 03/04/10 06:25 PM
Mig, this was fantastic...You are another one that pens beautiful writes....

jimz's photo
Thu 03/04/10 08:29 PM
awesome

kdough's photo
Fri 03/05/10 06:25 PM
flowerforyou I LOVE THIS ,,,IT MADE ME THINK OF A FEW DIIFRENT EXSPERINCE'S..KUDOS..drinker

bamtino's photo
Sun 03/07/10 11:37 AM
Nice write,,,,

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Sun 03/07/10 08:05 PM
drinker A VERY COOL write man.......drinker

kc0003's photo
Sun 03/07/10 08:10 PM
very nice

realwoman56's photo
Mon 03/08/10 07:12 AM
such a sad sweet write very good and so sad, love the thousand tears ,beautiful skp:cry: waving

pkh's photo
Mon 03/08/10 07:48 AM
very good write

mig25's photo
Tue 03/09/10 06:15 PM
Wow, thank you all.

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 03/09/10 06:44 PM
"when I was a reflection of your joy"--I really love this line

What and amazing description....This is a great poem.

Bravo!!