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Topic: ~ wind at my back
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 12/11/12 07:25 PM
'your first winter here?' i say yes 'wait.it gets better' always said with joy ive never known wind wind as whats here here in this place someone suggested i put rocks rocks in my pockets my coat is furtrimmed my boots are radiant i wish everything to be radiant wind wind wind is a four letter word to me

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/11/12 11:36 PM
love this concept, teasing.. wind is indeed just a four letter word.. but has such vast implications..

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 12/12/12 06:02 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Wed 12/12/12 06:07 AM
Smiling...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 12/12/12 08:58 AM
you have a gift to say so much with so few words i think you are brilliant!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 12/12/12 04:18 PM
i'm with leigh, smiling... :)

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 12/12/12 05:22 PM
AthenaRose2....i appreciate your reading & comments... tazzops... Leigh.... kc...back at ya... bastet...

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 12/12/12 08:17 PM
For sure about the gift of so few words and pumping out awesome writes TB...

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Thu 12/13/12 01:41 AM
baby it's cold outside . . . love this

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 12/13/12 06:34 PM
Ainjel.....im pleased you and others find something in my writing.... mig25....awww!

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