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Topic: monoliths
DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 07/07/08 05:27 AM
summer late afternoon sweat pouring out, so humid the air filled to capacity every movement made with efficiency to minimize the sweat running down your back all seems still, muted slow motion in the sun that has shown no mercy but on the horizon black clouds bubble up from nowhere monolithic clouds that in poetic history have stood for sadness, depression, or danger to come yet the sight of them now brings hope brings rain

May777 Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 1238	Mon 07/07/08 05:50 AM
can just feel the heat

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 07/07/08 06:00 AM
That was good!

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 07/07/08 09:23 AM
thank you. very much what it is like outside today

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 07/07/08 09:32 AM


pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 07/07/08 10:36 AM
could feel the heat bearing down. Great write.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/07/08 10:41 AM
Excellent write Dirk This piece is definitely one that can be felt I'm drinking very cold iced tea right now

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 07/07/08 11:08 AM
"every movement made with efficiency to minimize the sweat"

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 07/07/08 04:36 PM
again, thank you all. it's nice to write something that can truly be felt

TwilightsTwin Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 11054	Mon 07/07/08 06:08 PM
very nicely done!

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