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Topic: Scars
Wiccancowboy Joined Mon 10/01/07 Posts: 800	Sun 03/30/08 03:19 PM
Scars we all have them if we didnt then how would we learn Some arent seen some are some find was to make the unseen seen with the ink on their skin... Broken bones and hearts Mistakes that made who we are They remind us that we are Mortal and we can hury That we arent ten feet tall and bullet proof From the blood we spilt as a child to the Loss of someone dear we all carry a burden that is ours and eachone is different. we carry some with a heavy heart and some with pride. Men Women all carry them and sometime we grew up with them no matter the case we all are human. Broken bones broken homes we all come from different walk of life but we are all human and we all have the scars to show it.

sandnpearls Joined Sat 02/02/08 Posts: 125	Sun 03/30/08 03:22 PM
very nice

adirtygirl Joined Tue 03/11/08 Posts: 4008	Sun 03/30/08 03:22 PM
thats cool. We hope you come home safe

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Sun 03/30/08 03:22 PM
Good prose!! Get home SAFELY!!!!!!!!

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sun 03/30/08 03:23 PM
Excellent write bro

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/30/08 03:25 PM
Some scars Just fade away, and yet some WE TRY SO HARD TO NOT REMEMBER THEM EACH DAY! Good Heart in your write here..

wickedlluccy Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 1040	Sun 03/30/08 03:32 PM
Scars we all have them if we didnt then how would we learn Some arent seen some are some find was to make the unseen seen with the ink on their skin... Broken bones and hearts Mistakes that made who we are They remind us that we are Mortal and we can hury That we arent ten feet tall and bullet proof From the blood we spilt as a child to the Loss of someone dear we all carry a burden that is ours and eachone is different. we carry some with a heavy heart and some with pride. Men Women all carry them and sometime we grew up with them no matter the case we all are human. Broken bones broken homes we all come from different walk of life but we are all human and we all have the scars to show it. ....so serious baby boy, lookin kinda low, thought of you while @ the movies yesterday....to me you'll always be bullet proof....Texas was boreing w/o ya'll hun...your a short man..times coming up...Texas dust is gonna blow across your face & into your lungs soon enough... ~so mote it be~ ur friend ~wicked~

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sun 03/30/08 04:09 PM
Prayers for ya... come home safe and keep in touch!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76370	Sun 03/30/08 04:23 PM
So very true. Want be long and you will be home once again

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sun 03/30/08 04:57 PM


RICKG1961 Joined Sun 04/01/07 Posts: 331	Sun 03/30/08 05:10 PM
come home safe and THANK YOU......

Wiccancowboy Joined Mon 10/01/07 Posts: 800	Tue 04/01/08 08:16 PM
Thank ya'll for the replies and the love...I know there alot of support for me as a Soldier, but if ya could do me one favor..Next time you see a homeless man ot woman it wouldnt hurt to give them a couple dollors, your good deed is done and it'll come back to ya. Yeah they may go buy booze, but they may go buy dinner. Just do it for me.... Thank you again Wiccan

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 04/01/08 08:20 PM
Thank ya'll for the replies and the love...I know there alot of support for me as a Soldier, but if ya could do me one favor..Next time you see a homeless man ot woman it wouldnt hurt to give them a couple dollors, your good deed is done and it'll come back to ya. Yeah they may go buy booze, but they may go buy dinner. Just do it for me.... Thank you again Wiccan You are a wonderful mand and and friend! Hope all is well with you! Vicki

misty4ran Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 7300	Tue 04/01/08 08:22 PM