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Topic: ~A Whisper To Jenn.~
Cybear's photo
Wed 02/07/07 05:28 AM
When tomorrow starts without me
And I'm not here to see;
If the sun should rise and find your eyes
All filled with tears for me;
I wish so much you wouldn't cry
The way you did today.

While thinking of the many things
We didn't get to say;
I know how much you love me
As much as I love you;
And each time that you think of me
I know you'll miss me too.

But when tomorrow starts without me
Please try to understand;
That an angel came and called my name
And took me by the hand;
And said my place was ready
In Heaven far above.

And that I'd have to leave behind
All those I dearly love;
But as I turned to walk away
A tear fell from my eye;
For all my life,I'd always thought
I didn't want to die.

I had so much to live for
So much yet to do;
It seemed almost impossible
That I was leaving you;
I thought of all the yesterdays
The good ones and the bad.

Thoughts of the love we'd share
All the fun we could have
If I could relive yesterday;
Just even for a while
I'd say goodbye and kiss you.

And maybe see you smile
But then I realized
That this could never be;
For emptiness and memories
Would take the place of me.

And when I thought of worldly things
I might miss come tomorrow
I thought of you,and when I did;
My heart was filled with sorrow
But when I walked through Heaven's gates.

I felt so much at home
When God looked down and smiled at me
From his Great Golden Throne;
He said "This is eternity"
And all I've promised you.

Today for life on Earth is past
But here it starts anew
I promise no tomorrow;
But today will always last
And since each day's the same day.

There's no longing for the past
So when tomorrow starts without me
Don't think we're far apart;
For every time you think of me
I'm right here,in your heart!

Submitted by Cybear 1/7/07
Your Bearific Friend Always.
To:SugarJenn~From:Daddy:heart: :smile: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 02/07/07 07:32 AM
Ohhh Cybear that was so sweet of you to do that for
Sugarjenn. It actually brought a tear to my eyes as
well I lost my dad 3 years ago all of a sudden and
I dearly miss him your poem touched my heart in more
ways than you will know thanky you as well. flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 02/07/07 07:38 AM
You have a real way with getting a tear from me. To tell of such beauty
is an art in itself, thank you for the Great read it truly is from the
heart.

:wink:

G

dizzydean5's photo
Wed 02/07/07 07:41 AM
thank you cyb bear a got it copyed ill need it soon dean

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 02/07/07 11:57 AM
Beautifully written! Life is so short, we should all appreciate each and
every day thouroughly and not take one another for granted, for we could
be taken away at any given moment. Memories of who we are and what we
sand for last a lifetime for those that remain behind. Thanks once again
Cy...flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Wed 02/07/07 12:01 PM
That was GREAT Cybear. You do have way of putting emotions into words.

slowtogetit's photo
Wed 02/07/07 12:10 PM
cybear you just amaze with how you can take words and make them touch
someone.........i'm glad that i have you as a friend.

no photo
Wed 02/07/07 12:13 PM
Cybear thank you so much for your beautiful words.
You have brought tears to my eyes In a beautiful way.
It means so much to know that there are wonderful, caring people in the
world as yourself.....hugs my friend thank you

no photo
Wed 02/07/07 12:15 PM
Oh that is so beautiful ,make me get all teared up, and a big lump in my
throat ,you are greatflowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 02/07/07 01:44 PM
aaawwweee that was so beautiful cybear makes me cry and wish my daddy
was here physically but he is here in spirit thats what counts
i think u should publish this one

Fanta46's photo
Wed 02/07/07 02:27 PM
Go here


www.nethugs.com/tomorrowstarts.shtml

Fanta46's photo
Wed 02/07/07 02:32 PM
he cant publish it, he didnt write it

Fanta46's photo
Wed 02/07/07 02:40 PM
This is a beautiful poem, unfortunately, you did not publish the source
Plagarism is what it is no matter the good intentions!
dont lie it is punishable, and I take plagarism seriously!

spay's photo
Wed 02/07/07 03:00 PM
SUCH A SHAME - I REALLY THOUGHT THAT WAS GOOD. IT'S MEAN FOR PPL TO PLAY
WITH OUR EMOTIONS LIKE THAT !grumble

michael1313's photo
Wed 02/07/07 03:24 PM
it says "SUBMITTED BY"

he didn't say he wrote it...

you being a "wolf of fate" there Fanta?

just biting for th pack?

no photo
Wed 02/07/07 05:56 PM
i swear this place is like a freak show i wish people would look before
they leap into saying something that clearly everyone can see he said
and i quote for all the idiots who cant freakin read (SUBMITTED BY)
not (WRITTEN BY)

I KNOW THIS IS NOT ANY OF MY BUISNESS BUT CYBEAR IS PROBABLY ONE OF THE
GREATEST PEOPLE I KNOW HERE AND HE DOES NOTHING TO HURT PEOPLE SO PLEASE
IF U R GOING TO POST ON HIS POEMS PLEASE READ THEM BEFORE SPOUTING OFF
AT THE MOUTH

no photo
Wed 02/07/07 06:24 PM
i need to correct myself cuz maybe i started this crap
i said u should publish this one not thinking about the submitted
part....
cybear im sorry for misprinting my words

venusrose's photo
Wed 02/07/07 10:26 PM
Well, it still is beautiful...and it brought tears to my eyes. Cybear
thanks for submitting for all of us to enjoy. (copy and paste)

michael1313's photo
Wed 02/07/07 10:31 PM
I even emailed a copy to my neice to readsmokin

venusrose's photo
Wed 02/07/07 10:35 PM
Yup, going out to all my email buddies too.

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