Topic: Read this poem out loud!
lizardking19's photo
Wed 06/11/08 07:05 AM
Young people
Men in tuxedos
And women in dresses
The equivalent of suits of armor
Stumbling stupidly throuhg alleyways
Not drunk
Just Stupid
Searching for parties they think are being thrown
By other sober twits also stumbling stupid
Looking for those same parties
Not being thrown by their compadres
Who as I said
Are stumbling sober
They eventually go home
To empty apartments
Smelling of sweat nad despair
Wishing they had
Heartbreaks, hangovers, used condoms in their pockets and pot smoke sizzling from their nostrils
But alas
Such pleasure is for the confident
Who may or may not exist
HERE
Is where this poem and reality collide
I have written it in black crayon
The death of the evening
Is Myself
I am a drug addict
Who has never soiled his veins, liver or lungs
A virgin priest in the guise of an anarchist pervert
Wanting to be the latter
But instead being a ladder that nobody will climb
(instructions for reading this poem)
(the next few lines, read them in a mr rogers impersonation)
"Now children today we're going to talk about psychotic breakdowns. Have you eve had a psychotic breakdown?
As you know recently king friday climbed a water tower with a high powered rifle and hurt a lot of puppets"
(now stop reading like mr rogers)
(dont read this out loud it's in parentheses you moron)
I have written this in black crayon
I will never stumble stupid or drunk down an alleyway looking for a quick grope
My conscience wouldn't allow it
Damn conscience
I just sit here
In a plastic party hat with a strap on my chin
Blowing on one of those paper nois-maker things that shoots out like a tongue and mkae a FWEEET noise
So I lift my plastic glass of applejuice
In a toast
Hoping i can one day enjoy the fruits of my self-destruction
I have written this in black crayons
FWEEEET



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Wed 06/11/08 07:12 AM
you have a creative vision that speaks- I always reread at least twice. drinker drinker
Love your work

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Wed 06/11/08 07:14 AM
Scary, but very good!! drinker

AngelLight's photo
Wed 06/11/08 08:18 AM
Ty for your write drinker

lizardking19's photo
Wed 06/11/08 09:19 AM
uch i just looked over and its FILLED with typos, eww


jimz's photo
Wed 06/11/08 02:38 PM
I liked this poem. The poem is so good you hardly notice the typos.

Peace
Jimmy

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Wed 06/11/08 02:59 PM
I love it King! love

It's really great, but oh those typos! ohwell

You need to take more pride in your work and quit typing like a friggin nerd, FWEEEET! :tongue: