Topic: Time
2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 06/12/08 02:53 AM
Edited by 2Btrue2One on Thu 06/12/08 02:53 AM
Time seems to move slowly
but sometimes it can be fast
and you never know
which day will be your last

You look at the clock
you watch and you wait
but it seems all we ever do
is just hesitate

What have I done
with my time
have I been good
have I been kind

Was I afraid to take chances
that I should have took
should I go back
and take another look

Will I have time
to fulfill my dreams
not much is left
or so it seems

Time is so uncertian
and you never know
as you watch it all go
right out the window

There was a time
when I was so bold
maybe I should give up
maybe i'm to old

When I was younger
I never thought about time
now I realize
it can stop on a dime

As I go through time
should I have changed
is there anything in my life
I should have rearranged

Time seems
to move so slowly
when you are on that path
to find your one and only

By Daniel
11/07/07

I wrote this a while back, figured I would post it to see if anyone has ever thought about time in this way.. our life won't last forever, ans some of us are getting closer to their lives running full circle.. life is to short to play games, so if we are truly here to find that special someone, then we should be bold enough to give it all we've got.. jmo..

Britty's photo
Thu 06/12/08 04:43 AM


so true


flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Thu 06/12/08 05:12 AM
nice thoughtflowerforyou
Time seems to move slowly
but sometimes it can be fast
and you never know
which day will be your last

You look at the clock
you watch and you wait
but it seems all we ever do
is just hesitate

What have I done
with my time
have I been good
have I been kind

Was I afraid to take chances
that I should have took
should I go back
and take another look

Will I have time
to fulfill my dreams
not much is left
or so it seems

Time is so uncertian
and you never know
as you watch it all go
right out the window

There was a time
when I was so bold
maybe I should give up
maybe i'm to old

When I was younger
I never thought about time
now I realize
it can stop on a dime

As I go through time
should I have changed
is there anything in my life
I should have rearranged

Time seems
to move so slowly
when you are on that path
to find your one and only

By Daniel
11/07/07

I wrote this a while back, figured I would post it to see if anyone has ever thought about time in this way.. our life won't last forever, ans some of us are getting closer to their lives running full circle.. life is to short to play games, so if we are truly here to find that special someone, then we should be bold enough to give it all we've got.. jmo..

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 06/12/08 08:19 AM
It truly fits the moment for me. Ohhh how I can relate to this time is passing me by way to fast. I need an anchor to slow it down.flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Thu 06/12/08 08:43 AM
Your write is beautiful...flowerforyou :heart:

My thoughts on Time Daniel....

A piece I wrote 09/28/06...It is also called TIME


Take time, and make time,
for those you love. The time
is now, not tomorrow, or the
day after. Now is what we
have with each other, our
brothers and sisters, our
friends and lovers, and some
others.

Take time, and make time,
for those you love. Tell them
what they mean to you, now.
I�ve seen it happen all too
often where people die before
they know how much they�ve
grown in the hearts of many.
You say there�s plenty of time?
Realign your priorities.

Take time, and make time,
for those you love. The trouble
is we run from here to there,
and there to here, often
forgetting who stands right
before us; gentle Souls who
pour their light on us, shine
for us, just because they love
us.

Take time, and make time,
for those you love. Get caught
up in them in the best of ways,
and don�t say (or pretend) you
have forever. And never forget
to say �I love you�, as now is
all there is. So don't play
proud; just say out loud all you
feel in your heart, today.

JDS Posted 06/12/08

reason4everything's photo
Thu 06/12/08 08:45 AM
flowerforyou both very nice and so very trueflowerforyou

mteagle31's photo
Thu 06/12/08 08:48 AM
Nice writes both of you!!!
BRAVO,BRAVO!!!

drinker drinker drinker drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 06/12/08 11:25 AM
Well said Danielflowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 06/12/08 03:50 PM
Thank you Britty, Frank, mteagle, reason4everything...
flowerforyou drinker drinker flowerforyou

kristi, I know how you feel believe me..flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

Angel, that was a beautiful poem, and much appreciated that you took the time to post it in here.. Thank you..
flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 06/12/08 03:53 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou
Tics away way too fast!
Good write Daniel!

EarthSprite's photo
Thu 06/12/08 04:22 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Thu 06/12/08 04:34 PM
Great Poem, you could feel truth when you read it.
peace
Jimmy

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 06/12/08 06:11 PM
MsTeddy, Jimmy, Thank you both..flowerforyou drinker

Sprite, Thank you, and how are you? You have been in my prayers.. God bless you girl..:heart: flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Thu 06/12/08 06:40 PM
I too thought I was out of time to fulfill some dreams.sad Today those dreams are coming true and it is still hard to believe that more may actually come true.bigsmile

You are not alone in some of the thoughts you put to paper, yet as I put them to paper they started to become reality.

May your words become a reality of your own making.

drinker bigsmile

G

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 06/12/08 07:54 PM
Thank you Gryphyn.. encouraging words to live by..drinker