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i remember our first date
peanut butter and jelly
it was
love at first bite
you look wonderful tonight

i remember the wild flowers
on the second date
still pressed between pages
felt like
heaven had sent
my archangel

i remember
f
a
l
l
in love hard
n
g

i remember
his touch
his scent
his love
his eyes

i remember
his son
his family
even the wallpaper in the bathroom
at his moms

i remember the day he moved in
it rained

i remember
the trips
the bliss
the cuddles
the passion
the taste of his lips

i remember finding out
manicdepressantalcoholicwithsuicidaltendancies

i remember
choosing not to believe

i remember the pact
that we made
the pin prick

i remember
the .40 he blew
the walking deadman
the knives
the scars
the cops
the crashes
the rehabs
the lies
the betrayal
the pain
his
more than mine

i remember breathing every inch
of him in
and yet...somehow
i can't remember the last glance we shared.

was he ever really here?
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awesome!!!

That was beautiful.

thank you

Like it.

yeah, nice!

"I like it"

Alot!

Very Cool!

Such a splendid write.Riveting & so haunting.

thanks johnsmithtoo

anyliz, thanks so much!

dt...coming from one of the best, that means alot!

cy...it was and still does, thank you!

Wow talk about a karmic gangbang

...i may have to rethink the title now

WOW just WOW that was totally awesome!!

I am deeply moved. Thank you.

That was absolutely great

thank you all so much for reading. it's not something i speak of often, but i finally found the words.

txgal and sharris ~ from you both this means so much!

flame1cutie ~ thank you, thank you!!

Usually, your first instinct is correct. I would not see any need to change anything..it is from your heart, the deepest part of you..
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Powerful write, very moving.

thanks pk, i appreciate the read!!

Wow. Very powerful bastet... Powerful write.

And, the title is perfect. I don't think you have to change a thing