Topic: Dance Among The Trees
Mystique42's photo
Tue 08/05/08 07:30 PM
Oh to dance among the trees,
Of crimson red or forest green,
Free as a lark or bird of blue,
Delicate as a drop of dew.
To pirouette first up then down,
Or slowly sway to kiss the ground,
Until the wind draws up a gust,
Begin again as autumn must.
Graceful as a falling star,
Strumming , strumming- old guitar,
Finale radiant though veins be crisp,
Dropping, dropping in pale mist.
Children gather among the trees
Cascading colors . . . a frenzied breeze
Triumphant flies her fate once more,
Whirling, whirling to meet the floor.
She dances once, she dances twice-
Among the trees to greet the ice,
Wintery boughs shall miss her dance,
Among the trees upon a branch.

SDF


MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 08/05/08 07:33 PM
niceflowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Tue 08/05/08 07:47 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 08/05/08 07:47 PM
Love the flow good onebigsmile

Mystique42's photo
Mon 08/11/08 10:49 AM
Thank you! Txs, flame, and mirror! Have a Great day!flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 08/11/08 11:17 AM
What a feeling of whimsical floating so calm and gentle. Beautiful.

mteagle31's photo
Mon 08/11/08 11:51 AM
Nicely done!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!flowers

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 08/11/08 05:20 PM
The flow was picturesque and beautiful. Very nicely written.