Topic: Frozen Tears
Sharris's photo
Wed 08/13/08 10:29 AM
Frozen Tears

even the sea
in its stark and frozen
salty
crusts the surface
to hide the flow
underneath where the blue
has not turned to
blood red
remember
stays frozen
in its pain
wanting to move
waiting for the ice ships
to crack the top
change its path
so it splashes sloshes
wells and swells
between the distance
where healing
tears again
never the same season
still, frozen tears
remember

Raine Les 8/13/2008

BobbyJ's photo
Wed 08/13/08 10:42 AM
Beautiful! flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 08/13/08 10:47 AM
Thank you....wonderfulbigsmile flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 08/13/08 10:52 AM
Tears release the emotion just enough to keep the frozen surface intact. But they become part of that frozen surface.
I hope I got what you were saying. Well written.flowers

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 08/13/08 12:59 PM
It is our tears that cleans the soul within.flowers

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/13/08 01:04 PM
Great write. happy flowerforyou