she’s not...a girl
she’s more than...that


she’ll pick you up
she’ll lay you down
in her arms it’s all the same
she gives you life
and with just a look
she’ll take your breath away
and though she breaks
she’s stronger than
...you’ll ever be
the world’s alive
and through her eyes she’ll
...make you see

she’s not a girl she’s a...woman
more than a girl she’s a...woman
not a girl she’s so much...more
from her longest lash deep to her core


she’s an underrated
complicated life educated
...diplomat
she’s broken hearts
started wars
and brought the peace right back
she knows the pain
of having lived
...a love in vein
her tears have washed like
rain down
...a windowpane
she’s a tragedy a comedy and
...a mystery
an open book
for those who take
...the time to read
under her wing
she’ll make you better than
you could ever be
she’s living proof of the saying
...only women bleed

she’s not... a girl
she’s more than that
from her... core
to her longest lash
no not... a girl
she’s more than that
from her... core
to her longest lash

she's a girl
she’s a woman
deep to her core
she loves unconditionally
and this is her world


kc08

thanks mom...

Beautiful. Oh KC you have been thinking. This is lovely. You have prompted me to go back to blue's challenge on the core of aman with this one. What a talent you are my friend. May I copy this one to share with some friends?

Now that's well put and compelling...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My Mr Wonderful,, Simply Beautiful
As for the Thanks its all you came from your Soul,,,

Pure-ness in its rarest form

Bravoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Kiss's

Don't be late for Tea

thank you (A)
yes do go back...i look forward to it..

and yes of course you may (thank you for asking)

thank you very much

awwwww mom

you are sooooo kind
i am glad you are who you are to me and nothing will ever change that!!!!

you!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome!

thank you jim

Yea! A new one

Glad to see you back

S

You

thanks stef

Its been to long my friend! Wish i could have put it like you did. I might have hit the Nail on the head but you drove the nail through the wall! what a great write.

man i have not been able to write anything since "awkward pause" over a month ago but, i could not let the challenge from miswiz go without a try

thank you for the kind words

Now hopefully I can get over MY block and rise to Blue's challenge!

I am sure you will not disappoint

awwwww sweets that was most beautiful.......