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Topic: Everything
iceprincess Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 5938	Tue 09/02/08 10:07 AM
I would have given you everything All you needed do was ask I'd have laid it all on the line All you needed do was draw I'd have done nothing All you needed do was something We danced around ourselves Tantalizing Hinting Lying We pretended we both knew Just what the other wanted Taking all for ourselves Leaving nothing but festering sore A sore we called Love I loved me You loved you We pretend we love Each other I would have given you everything All you needed do was ask I'd have laid it all on the line All you needed do was draw I'd have done nothing All you needed do was something The Lie we tell each other Neither of us would have done Anything

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 09/02/08 10:16 AM Edited by s1owhand on Tue 09/02/08 10:27 AM
that's good ((ice))

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Tue 09/02/08 10:18 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 09/02/08 01:26 PM
Spinning in circles with grins of delight!

shortiemix Joined Wed 08/20/08 Posts: 69	Tue 09/02/08 01:46 PM
that's some good poetry right there..you go girl.

iceprincess Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 5938	Tue 09/02/08 03:48 PM
Thank-you............you guys are so sweet..........

liltazz Joined Tue 07/29/08 Posts: 217	Tue 09/02/08 03:53 PM
That's very good.

shadowdog Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 12773	Tue 09/02/08 05:34 PM
hey ice!!--nice reading

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 09/02/08 07:33 PM
Ice nice to see you home again,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 09/03/08 05:45 PM
Thank-you............you guys are so sweet.......... Lies hurt, and words build,wink,,NICE WRITE and you rock-on!!!!! Keep um coming...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 09/03/08 06:15 PM
Nice write

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