Topic: Love Poem
myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 09/20/08 12:57 PM
Write me a poem, you say, your eyes bright with
enthusiasm.
A poem? But I am not a poet; I don’t know how to!
Write me something anyway, you insist, something that
rhymes ...

‘Something that rhymes’?

The way your name rhymes
with the chimes of the clock,
the click of the key in the lock,
the knock-knock-knock of your knuckles
on the door of my heart?

The way your breath
is the sonnet you breathed on my cheek,
the song you shaped on my lips,
the dip-slip-trip of your tongue
in the house of my mouth?

The way your being
harmonizes every dissonance in the world,
synchronizes every assonance on this earth,
the way your just being

brings about a singular cosmic
rhyme of love of love of lovelovelove
below, between, all around, above,

a universe
of rhyming prose and verse that I can never get
enough enough enough
of.

You are the poet, the poem,
the poetry in motion, the
Geetanjali of love, my love,

not me.

flame1cutie's photo
Sat 09/20/08 01:05 PM
That was a very nice writeflowerforyou

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Sat 09/20/08 01:18 PM
Gurudev ((myanimalc)) flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 09/20/08 01:19 PM
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myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 09/20/08 02:40 PM
Thank you

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Sat 09/20/08 02:57 PM
nice write

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Sun 09/21/08 06:35 AM
nice as alwaysflowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 09/22/08 04:43 PM
flowerforyou Nice flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 09/22/08 05:07 PM
Thank you

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TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 09/22/08 05:08 PM
good oneflowerforyou