Topic: Don't hesitate!!
Noden's photo
Wed 10/08/08 08:54 AM
Edited by Noden on Wed 10/08/08 08:59 AM
Don't hesitate!!


Can you feel the patter in my chest
don't you know its longing for a place to rest
didn't I kiss your loving lips
leaving my essences all over your face
in your favor you kiss my cheek
like a little girl after the meet,

Now I go on waiting for another chance
to see you for what, a mere glance
can't you see I wanted more
you didn't even bother to explore
saying it was only the first date
god I didn't want you to hesitate,

Feeling like a wolf in the wait
lost at the lover or hells gate
need more compassion it cannot wait
next time I see you, you'd better make haste
hell just press your lips upon mine
lets just see what the the cupid dust finds.


Dabblins of ...

Nodentongue2

doodlebuggrrl's photo
Wed 10/08/08 08:55 AM
Nice...love

Noden's photo
Wed 10/08/08 08:55 AM

Nice...love


Thanks girlie...tongue2

no photo
Wed 10/08/08 09:01 AM
Very Niceflowerforyou flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Wed 10/08/08 09:03 AM

Very Niceflowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you bunchesdrinks tongue2

AngelLight's photo
Wed 10/08/08 04:16 PM
Very nice write Noden flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Wed 10/08/08 05:16 PM
great write -no sense of wasting timedrinker drinker

liltazz's photo
Wed 10/08/08 05:19 PM
Very nice. flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/08/08 06:32 PM
Humm ohh yeah who is he?

johncarl's photo
Wed 10/08/08 06:50 PM
flowerforyou waving

Noden's photo
Thu 10/09/08 09:43 AM
Hi, wooooooozie nice comments,

thanks;

(((((johncarl, Txs, liltazz, pkd, AngelLight, MisKim, doodlebuggrrl)))))flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

BonnyMiss's photo
Thu 10/09/08 12:49 PM
Good write sis, I am so enjoying this new phase of yours. Hugs flowers flowers flowers