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Drifting on the waveless ocean,
On the sea of glass, On the object of reflection No destination in mind on this sea of black Its depths are unknown Its width is unfathomable It's a painfull place Where there was life Now their is death Where there was joy Now there is sadness How long has it been? A minute? An Hour? A day? I no longer time Time does not exist here My small raft is my prison That carries me nowhere On this ocean of my soul |
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bittersweet
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nice write sad or not...
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Drifting on the waveless ocean, On the sea of glass, On the object of reflection No destination in mind on this sea of black Its depths are unknown Its width is unfathomable It's a painfull place Where there was life Now their is death Where there was joy Now there is sadness How long has it been? A minute? An Hour? A day? I no longer time Time does not exist here My small raft is my prison That carries me nowhere On this ocean of my soul awesome |
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 Isaac
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Wow. Great job....Unbelievably poignant
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whoa!!! I felt that ...
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Very nice write. Remember that hope is the strength and buoyancy needed to walk upon the waters deep.
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(((Shari)))
Thanks everyone appreciate the comments  |
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great write
here's to smoother sailing ahead
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