Topic: Reluctant Voyeur
kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:10 PM


Live Oak
Reaching out
Far and wide
High and low

Out passed what seems practical
Out beyond simple physics
Stretching ever away
Testing its strength
Showing its patients
Cutting the sunlight
Into slivers
Distorting the rays as it sees fit
Cast a crooked shadow
Tracking along the clapboard siding
Slicing a sunbeam
At mid window
Lengthened silhouette
Of early morning sun
Through the glass
Passed the drawn curtains
Warped once more
By the foot of your bed
Climbing to find your feet
Inaudible whispers
In segmented shade
I am here…



no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:13 PM



Live Oak
Reaching out
Far and wide
High and low

Out passed what seems practical
Out beyond simple physics
Stretching ever away
Testing its strength
Showing its patients
Cutting the sunlight
Into slivers
Distorting the rays as it sees fit
Cast a crooked shadow
Tracking along the clapboard siding
Slicing a sunbeam
At mid window
Lengthened silhouette
Of early morning sun
Through the glass
Passed the drawn curtains
Warped once more
By the foot of your bed
Climbing to find your feet
Inaudible whispers
In segmented shade
I am here…





I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it. :heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:20 PM




Live Oak
Reaching out
Far and wide
High and low

Out passed what seems practical
Out beyond simple physics
Stretching ever away
Testing its strength
Showing its patients
Cutting the sunlight
Into slivers
Distorting the rays as it sees fit
Cast a crooked shadow
Tracking along the clapboard siding
Slicing a sunbeam
At mid window
Lengthened silhouette
Of early morning sun
Through the glass
Passed the drawn curtains
Warped once more
By the foot of your bed
Climbing to find your feet
Inaudible whispers
In segmented shade
I am here…





I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it. :heart:



it’s easy (A)
it is in response to ako’s post
i was picturing the window in her story

maybe i should have put it there

:heart:

beauty314's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:22 PM
i can see it..awesomeflowerforyou

no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:30 PM





Live Oak
Reaching out
Far and wide
High and low

Out passed what seems practical
Out beyond simple physics
Stretching ever away
Testing its strength
Showing its patients
Cutting the sunlight
Into slivers
Distorting the rays as it sees fit
Cast a crooked shadow
Tracking along the clapboard siding
Slicing a sunbeam
At mid window
Lengthened silhouette
Of early morning sun
Through the glass
Passed the drawn curtains
Warped once more
By the foot of your bed
Climbing to find your feet
Inaudible whispers
In segmented shade
I am here…





I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it. :heart:



it’s easy (A)
it is in response to ako’s post
i was picturing the window in her story

maybe i should have put it there

:heart:



Ahhhh I see. I thought I saw some semblance of familiarity. Two great minds~My ako and my Kevin. An awesome sight to behold

no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:30 PM
all tales continue somehow even after the final chapter

i love this, kevdrinker :heart:

very nice

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:36 PM

i can see it..awesomeflowerforyou


thank you for your vision and response

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:45 PM






Live Oak
Reaching out
Far and wide
High and low

Out passed what seems practical
Out beyond simple physics
Stretching ever away
Testing its strength
Showing its patients
Cutting the sunlight
Into slivers
Distorting the rays as it sees fit
Cast a crooked shadow
Tracking along the clapboard siding
Slicing a sunbeam
At mid window
Lengthened silhouette
Of early morning sun
Through the glass
Passed the drawn curtains
Warped once more
By the foot of your bed
Climbing to find your feet
Inaudible whispers
In segmented shade
I am here…





I need to ponder this one Kevin. It has grabbed my attention and I want to mentally chew on it. :heart:



it’s easy (A)
it is in response to ako’s post
i was picturing the window in her story

maybe i should have put it there

:heart:



Ahhhh I see. I thought I saw some semblance of familiarity. Two great minds~My ako and my Kevin. An awesome sight to behold


blushing blushing blushing blushing blushing

well,one great mind and mine (yet to be determined) but, thank you just the same

:heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:54 PM

all tales continue somehow even after the final chapter

i love this, kevdrinker :heart:

very nice



yes they do weather we know it or not...want it or not...admit it or not...

thanks for the inspiration...flowers think


:heart:

AngelLight's photo
Wed 11/19/08 09:11 AM
Edited by AngelLight on Wed 11/19/08 09:12 AM
Neat write K smokin


ak0 does have inspiring writes! :heart:


no photo
Wed 11/19/08 10:12 AM
Great write and I can see the tree clearly through the vision you've shownwaving :smile:

jimz's photo
Wed 11/19/08 03:33 PM
nice, yet I've enjoyed all your poems, talent!smokin

LAMom's photo
Thu 11/20/08 07:24 AM
((( Kevin ))))
You capture the Beauty of All, Its always a treat to come home and see what you have waiting for us:heart:

kc0003's photo
Thu 11/20/08 06:47 PM
angel
pkd
jim
mom

thank you all but, this was just an add to an even better write

flowers
flowers
drinker
flowers

no photo
Thu 11/20/08 06:49 PM
Nice kev


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Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 11/20/08 07:04 PM
Very nicely done my friend. COuld be a subtile dual meaning here which shines easy upon one's heart. Excellent write kc. glasses drinker

kc0003's photo
Thu 11/20/08 07:09 PM

Very nicely done my friend. COuld be a subtile dual meaning here which shines easy upon one's heart. Excellent write kc. glasses drinker


i knew you would not miss that...happy

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 11/20/08 07:23 PM
:banana: goodjob:banana: