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Topic: With this hand I take.
Paul1258 Joined Mon 02/23/09 Posts: 80	Wed 02/25/09 08:32 AM
With this hand I take. Place my heart with in your Hands. My fate with in your soul. As I gaze into your eyes. I become lost to all. Only knowing my true destination. That which leads me to you. Time has no meaning. My love for you only rules. My universe so vast. Now only resides in you. Your love for me. Shines like that of A beakon. Calling me home. To spend one second. Or the end of time. With you. only you. We are one.

Urg04es Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 1411	Wed 02/25/09 08:36 AM
WOW! Really nice.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 02/25/09 08:50 AM


Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Wed 02/25/09 08:54 AM
Nice write!

beautyfrompain Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 4696	Wed 02/25/09 08:54 AM
Well written Paul

Paul1258 Joined Mon 02/23/09 Posts: 80	Wed 02/25/09 09:01 AM
Thank you. Question- I write alot, do you think I am publishable. Please be honest but nice.

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