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Topic: The Human Condition
kc0003's photo
Mon 03/02/09 06:49 PM




great write

kind of makes me want to sing
...i'd like to teach
...the world to sing
...in perfect harmony.........

actually it made me jot this down

I stood
on the top
of that
granite
mountain
shimmied
to the outer
most reach
of the limb
of emotional
cause
screamed
at the top
of my
lungs
and waited...

there is
no more
sad a sound
than an
echo
returned
in
silence
and the
tear
inching
its way
down my
hardened
flesh
serves
as yet
another
reminder
that i
am all too
human...

:heart:



Yes, you are all too human.
And that is why we love you.:heart:




awwwwwwww thank you...and here i thought it was because you needed another hand to swab the deck...

:heart: :heart: :heart:


Well, I do have my ulterior motives too....

<<----handing him a mop and bucket..




i knew it!!!!!!! you little....oh sorry what i meant to do is walk away singing...

...and she'll promise you more than the garden of eden
then she'll carelessly cut you and laugh while you're bleeding
but she’ll bring out the best and the worst you can be
blame it all on yourself 'cause she's always a woman to me...

flowers bigsmile



Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:07 AM





great write

kind of makes me want to sing
...i'd like to teach
...the world to sing
...in perfect harmony.........

actually it made me jot this down

I stood
on the top
of that
granite
mountain
shimmied
to the outer
most reach
of the limb
of emotional
cause
screamed
at the top
of my
lungs
and waited...

there is
no more
sad a sound
than an
echo
returned
in
silence
and the
tear
inching
its way
down my
hardened
flesh
serves
as yet
another
reminder
that i
am all too
human...

:heart:



Yes, you are all too human.
And that is why we love you.:heart:




awwwwwwww thank you...and here i thought it was because you needed another hand to swab the deck...

:heart: :heart: :heart:


Well, I do have my ulterior motives too....

<<----handing him a mop and bucket..




i knew it!!!!!!! you little....oh sorry what i meant to do is walk away singing...

...and she'll promise you more than the garden of eden
then she'll carelessly cut you and laugh while you're bleeding
but she’ll bring out the best and the worst you can be
blame it all on yourself 'cause she's always a woman to me...

flowers bigsmile



laugh Wize choice!rofl

DaveyB's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:31 AM
The human condition is certainly a complex one especially when one is in pain. You've captured it well. flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 03/03/09 10:43 AM





great write

kind of makes me want to sing
...i'd like to teach
...the world to sing
...in perfect harmony.........

actually it made me jot this down

I stood
on the top
of that
granite
mountain
shimmied
to the outer
most reach
of the limb
of emotional
cause
screamed
at the top
of my
lungs
and waited...

there is
no more
sad a sound
than an
echo
returned
in
silence
and the
tear
inching
its way
down my
hardened
flesh
serves
as yet
another
reminder
that i
am all too
human...

:heart:



Yes, you are all too human.
And that is why we love you.:heart:




awwwwwwww thank you...and here i thought it was because you needed another hand to swab the deck...

:heart: :heart: :heart:


Well, I do have my ulterior motives too....

<<----handing him a mop and bucket..




i knew it!!!!!!! you little....oh sorry what i meant to do is walk away singing...

...and she'll promise you more than the garden of eden
then she'll carelessly cut you and laugh while you're bleeding
but she’ll bring out the best and the worst you can be
blame it all on yourself 'cause she's always a woman to me...

flowers bigsmile





Smart move Mister~laugh :heart:

no photo
Tue 03/03/09 10:44 AM

The human condition is certainly a complex one especially when one is in pain. You've captured it well. flowerforyou


Thank you. We all walk in pain at some point or another, do we not? flowerforyou

DaveyB's photo
Tue 03/03/09 10:53 AM


The human condition is certainly a complex one especially when one is in pain. You've captured it well. flowerforyou


Thank you. We all walk in pain at some point or another, do we not? flowerforyou


Most definitely flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 03/03/09 11:03 AM
Ongoing
Compass
Of / Rite of Passage
Earth, Dust and the Sky’s above
Human of a different kind
Survival of the ages
The sins
Self-Awareness of one’s own being
Human
Solitude
A condition
A journey
A welcoming
Of old, new and the not so seen future

:heart:


no photo
Wed 03/04/09 06:51 AM

Ongoing
Compass
Of / Rite of Passage
Earth, Dust and the Sky’s above
Human of a different kind
Survival of the ages
The sins
Self-Awareness of one’s own being
Human
Solitude
A condition
A journey
A welcoming
Of old, new and the not so seen future

:heart:





Lovely ~ ((((DENISE)))):heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 03/04/09 08:58 AM
At times we all reach that point we feel as if there is no return but then we find the light and once again find our way out of that deep dark hole we have once again fell into. Great write as always.flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 03/04/09 06:12 PM

At times we all reach that point we feel as if there is no return but then we find the light and once again find our way out of that deep dark hole we have once again fell into. Great write as always.flowerforyou


You are always so filled with warm wisdom ~ Thank you ~ :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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