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      what are my chances,what do you think.
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      Looks good, try running it through spell check. Women are definitely more spelling and grammar oriented than men. 
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      I agree....looks good but check your spelling. Also, my condolences on your recent loss. Good luck to you.    | |
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      Sorry about your loss. Best of luck to you. Get into the forums and you will get to know great and awesome friends.
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      how hard is it to start over again,
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      its good- right to the point- other than the spelling errors- its a nice profile- good pictures
 Im so sorry for your loss- just be patient- relax and let everyone get to know you. Just have fun and see what happens Welcome and good luck to you   | |
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      What do I need to run through spell check? 
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| What do I need to run through spell check? Your entire essay needs to be spell checked and proof read for grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors. | |
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      Spell check said it was correct.
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      The spelling is now corrected but you still have a few grammatical issues, comma splices, and inappropriate capitalizations.  
 I've seen much worse. However, there is still work to be done if you care. | |
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        nice_guy1952
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      so many people are getting a Divorce,What ever happen to for ever after.
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      Best of luck & always be yourself!!   | |
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