Topic: Chemical Rehab
brooke82's photo
Tue 12/22/09 04:28 AM
Chemical romance defines what I'm in.
Snorting lines of lies, laced with
a falsehood of what love is.

Enjoying the high that is received when
things seem to be going great, but coming down,
the headache and pain--is it worth it?

Needing a new fix, I shoot up
with the love from another--
only to then become addicted
to the true feelings of guilt.

I try drinking away what
memories remain,only to find
there is nothing left to
reflect upon anymore.

One last drag on the pipe
filled with my last bit of hope--
pain disapearing, eyes closing slowly
I have succesfully overdosed.

Dead from a broken heart--
they say cardiac arrest was the cause.
One too many times of being injected with betrayal-
---Should have went to rehab.

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 12/22/09 12:57 PM

Chemical romance defines what I'm in.
Snorting lines of lies, laced with
a falsehood of what love is.

Enjoying the high that is received when
things seem to be going great, but coming down,
the headache and pain--is it worth it?

Needing a new fix, I shoot up
with the love from another--
only to then become addicted
to the true feelings of guilt.

I try drinking away what
memories remain,only to find
there is nothing left to
reflect upon anymore.

One last drag on the pipe
filled with my last bit of hope--
pain disapearing, eyes closing slowly
I have succesfully overdosed.

Dead from a broken heart--
they say cardiac arrest was the cause.
One too many times of being injected with betrayal-
---Should have went to rehab.




flowerforyou nice writeflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 12/22/09 05:37 PM
flowerforyou Good write

no photo
Wed 12/23/09 12:08 AM
Great write. Killer metaphors.flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 12/23/09 12:12 AM
I know of many who have had a slice of that pie...... Me included. You nailed this one, superb write.

brooke82's photo
Wed 12/23/09 04:57 AM
Thank you so much for the comments flowerforyou

RainbowTrout's photo
Wed 12/23/09 05:40 AM
Awesome.:smile: Loved it.:smile:

brooke82's photo
Wed 12/23/09 05:42 AM
Thank you:smile:

no photo
Wed 12/23/09 06:21 AM
very nice, I can certainly relateflowerforyou

Updawg's photo
Wed 12/23/09 12:58 PM
Wow, very well done

brooke82's photo
Wed 12/23/09 01:51 PM
Thank you all for the commentsflowerforyou