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Topic: four hours of love
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Fri 03/30/12 03:48 AM
truly I must say
it was to be a boring flight
four hours in those small spaces
in the beginning
I kept hoping the seat would be empty
a chance to rest
no one to bug me
as the plane filled
I would look at the people passing by
somehow my neighboring spot remained void
lucky was I
a few more passengers then I'm home free
free from my elbow having to rub
my knee having to touch

a huge man passes by
a relief on my face I'm sure
and then
I honestly didn't see you getting on
blocked by these big bodies
you appeared from behind the mass
last person on
I was in shock to see your eyes gaze my way
but it was not me you looked at
it was your seat
politely I stood
as you passed by closely your fragrance
the smell of sweetness
fresh and clean

perfection
hair soft and simple
face that could grace angels
eyes so inviting and never leaving their mark
accent of the Ukraine
lips tender and moist
five seven no eight
the energy of lure
never pushy but always calling

I could have easily been moved to lust
but you knew this
your gentle ways suspended my thoughts
you spoke to me
you spoke to me not I you
you made my approach for me
and there I was inside of your world
pulled into your picture maybe passion
I could not think outside of you
I was captive bound and delivered
at the same time set free
stranger you are not
for that moment you knew my heart

being perfection
you protected my values while owning me
you were your own but everything was yes
speaking with your hands gently touching me
injecting me with you
letting me breathe you became my air

who is this woman
hand on my leg
head on my shoulder
making me your resting partner
snuggling on me with such ease
sleeping with such soundness
did I know you for a thousand years
you whisper are you alright as you inter-
lock your body on to mine
four hours of permanent
four hours of togetherness
four hours of love

you walk me to my car
holding my arm as if it were yours
your body matching my each step
head still pressed to my shoulder
we lean against my car with no goodbyes
only the breath of lips so close
thoughts so entwined
I watched you turn and walk away
the understanding was clear
oh how you move
perfection
for us
four hours of love

patsfan64's photo
Fri 03/30/12 04:00 AM
Well done mg! At first I thought this was an ode to Viagra.

Kaleijoscope's photo
Fri 03/30/12 05:04 AM
wow!
just 4 hours with her..and you've written this beautiful one...imagine having a lifetime with her...these are what memories are for...salute!

jemare's photo
Fri 03/30/12 08:49 AM
If that's a real life memory....it's definitely a keeper winking

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Fri 03/30/12 10:16 AM
drinker drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Fri 03/30/12 06:36 PM
Life breeds romance in the sweetest ways. When we are open to sharing love it's usually waiting for us.


Kaleijoscope's photo
Sat 03/31/12 10:19 PM

Life breeds romance in the sweetest ways. When we are open to sharing love it's usually waiting for us.


can i borrow this,mg1959? just want to share it with sos..

Kaleijoscope's photo
Sat 03/31/12 10:19 PM

Life breeds romance in the sweetest ways. When we are open to sharing love it's usually waiting for us.


can i borrow this,mg1959? just want to share it with sos..

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Mon 04/02/12 01:09 AM


Life breeds romance in the sweetest ways. When we are open to sharing love it's usually waiting for us.


can i borrow this,mg1959? just want to share it with sos..


Of course!

mssilverfox's photo
Mon 04/02/12 01:37 AM
What a beautiful write...very sexy in a way! blushing

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Mon 04/02/12 07:18 AM

Life breeds romance in the sweetest ways. When we are open to sharing love it's usually waiting for us.




Now that's poetry flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 04/03/12 02:59 AM
nice flight!

drinker

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Tue 04/03/12 02:20 PM
I'm getting on a plane in 3 weeks. I want a flight like that!!! NICE:smile:

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Wed 04/04/12 08:06 PM
I was greeted with an interesting email tonight. Since I am working in the studio at the same times next weekend I was booked on the same flight and the same seat as the flight I wrote about.

I love how romance fits into our lives.

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Fri 04/06/12 08:11 AM
If that woman is seated next to you again and you do not set up a date with her...shame on you. If you think it's not nice to fool with Mother Nature, wait till you see what happens when you look a gift horse in the mouth like Fate laugh Atleast get her number this time slaphead

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Sat 04/07/12 02:57 AM
Should I buy a ring just in case?

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Sat 04/07/12 06:53 AM
Love can be found in strange and unexpected places. Make like a Boy Scout and be ready- get the ring. :smile:

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Sat 04/07/12 07:18 AM
What cut should I get? And how am I going to get down on my knee in that little space?

bastet126's photo
Sat 04/07/12 07:30 AM
in all the seats on all the planes and you had to sit next
to mine. what would humphrey bogart do? :)

enjoyed that very much, i hope there is a sequel!flowerforyou

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Sat 04/07/12 07:59 AM
If you're surprising someone with a ring-I don't think they will be thinking about the cut....just saying. laughlaugh I'd just show her the poem. You'll be in like flynn.

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