Topic: Can I Get An Amen?
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Fri 03/30/12 12:54 PM
The sound on the line
Transforms me...electrified

Lightning has nothing on you.

Grass prickly with anticipation
I lie in wait
Wanting consummation, confirmation
Ready to attack this
Insane feeling, stomach dropping
Strong arm, ambush walking, talk
I've gotta have it, want to
Devour it on sight
The target oh so close
Can I have a bullseye?
Watch the center unfold

Showing us everything and nothing

What's the importance of
This southern conversation?
Lilting with sweetness
The sticky, stifling heat
Of words between us
Longing for a drink
Of you. Are you my tonic?
The potion that puts all
In motion as our words
Become action...and reaction
Demands a response

Hit me baby one more time
Again and again, in unison
The union of us two
Answering all the questions
We thought we knew
Tie up the loose ends, tightly
Corset bound and sound
And don't let us trip on
The what ifs, the timing
Let it be perfect, the call
Waiting to be answered

It all comes down to this

In a blink of an eye
We will see a thousand stories
Watch the miles between us
Disappear, in real time
For the first time
Both knowing it's
The last time
Either of us
Will have
Unanswered questions
Ever again.

Can I get an amen?

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Fri 03/30/12 01:03 PM
flowerforyou

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Fri 03/30/12 01:09 PM
OMG! You can have an Amen, an Awomen, an Aanything!

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Fri 03/30/12 04:44 PM
I'm absolutely in love with your writing, pkd.

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Fri 03/30/12 05:54 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 03/31/12 06:12 AM

I'm absolutely in love with your writing, pkd.


Well you know I feel the same way about yours C.:heart:

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Sat 03/31/12 06:14 AM

OMG! You can have an Amen, an Awomen, an Aanything!


Your response gets an AAA plus.laugh

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Sat 03/31/12 08:00 PM
Shshsh Amen, humm got ya one huh bigsmile .....:thumbsup:

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Sun 04/01/12 07:11 AM

Shshsh Amen, humm got ya one huh bigsmile .....:thumbsup:


Time will tell girl. Heading to Georgia for some southern hospitality in a few weeks. :wink: Fingers crossed.

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Mon 04/02/12 12:57 PM
Amen indeed. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Mon 04/02/12 11:05 PM
Amen..Loved it..

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Tue 04/03/12 12:14 PM
very nice,i liked it alot

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Tue 04/03/12 02:09 PM
Thanks for your comments

tazzops smile2
Ainjel biggrin
teasingbrunette happy

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Thu 04/05/12 04:54 PM
ooOoo yes, love this pkd!!

...Lightning has nothing on you.... i wanna steal that line! :P

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Sat 04/07/12 06:35 AM

ooOoo yes, love this pkd!!

...Lightning has nothing on you.... i wanna steal that line! :P


Go right ahead sweetie!!laugh