Topic: Just about you
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Thu 10/11/07 12:34 PM
time stood still as we lay there together
in this minute i have never felt better
close together my passion began to rise
it got stronger when i looked in your eyes
your touch sent me to places i only dream
your kisses made me really want to cream
i had to hold it back to pleasure you first
cause only your pleasure can quench my thirst
a single white rose you loved the touch
and with my tongue the pleasure was to much
you pulled me close and held me tight
your shakin body enjoying pure delight
together our bodies in rythem and motion
like the swing of the tides of a rising ocean
the heat between us really began to climb
the feeling of you thrusting in perfect time
soon my passion i could no longer control
and together in pleasure we both let go
then together we lay and i held you tight
wrapped together for the rest of the night
and now when i dream i dream only of you
and cant wait till we make them come true

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 10/11/07 12:39 PM
Nice poem...

shadow_princess's photo
Thu 10/11/07 12:42 PM
very nice

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Thu 10/11/07 12:45 PM
ty the poem hardly gives justice to the night but it was fun,

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Thu 10/11/07 12:48 PM
i was gonna email u n tell u but i cant so ill just tell u...u have a lot of talent

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Thu 10/11/07 12:57 PM
ty princess and let me fix that darn email thing again

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Thu 10/11/07 01:00 PM
i was with someone like that all day yesterday and all i could come up was..."thanks i needed that"....brendaflowerforyou

shadow_princess's photo
Thu 10/11/07 01:02 PM
ur welcome covington

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Thu 10/11/07 01:02 PM
LOL....so that's where you've been!:wink:

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Thu 10/11/07 01:02 PM
well at least it was a good day yesterday for you then bg

bgeorge's photo
Thu 10/11/07 01:03 PM
yep

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Thu 10/11/07 01:08 PM
who me?

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/11/07 01:10 PM
Whooooooa hooooooaa covington ohhhh hell ya back in my memories of time that seem to be fading away oh how I remember one that could do that to me hummmm huhhhh shshssss is it hot in here or is it just me lol devil devil devil smokin


Awesome write my friend!!!bigsmile



LAMom's photo
Thu 10/11/07 03:57 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Thu 10/11/07 06:59 PM
ty tex and la mom and tex it is hot in here

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/11/07 07:50 PM
LMAO hell it is steaming here lol got smoke signels going up what do you think loldevil devil devil :tongue: bigsmile smokin smokin

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Thu 10/11/07 07:52 PM
flowerforyou hi covington!! luv the poem sweetieflowerforyou

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Thu 10/11/07 11:39 PM
Awesome poem hunflowerforyou