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Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 09/26/15 05:12 AM
Pause with me, sit with me, on this regular park bench. Rustle beside me, with the insects, birds and gentle wind, Put down your newspaper, The sky shall not fall tomorrow -despite - the doomsday 'prophets' scrolls. Stay, just this one moment and hold my hand. Be.

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sat 09/26/15 11:05 AM
Ladywind, Wow, that i spectacularly beautiful my friend. Nice stuff pal. Deep and meaningful. Nice, Ladywind. tommo / Ireland

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 09/26/15 01:51 PM
Thank you Thom for wandering into my place of void of expectations or even thought.

Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Sat 09/26/15 05:54 PM
Beautiful works like this, keeps me coming back to Mingle! Ladywind, you're a very special lady...thanks for sharing...:-)

1Marie63 Joined Sat 09/05/15 Posts: 6737	Sat 09/26/15 05:57 PM
Lovely. I enjoy reading all of these

AdventureBegins Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 7666	Sat 09/26/15 06:41 PM


Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/27/15 12:56 PM
Beautiful works like this, keeps me coming back to Mingle! Ladywind, you're a very special lady...thanks for sharing...:-) ((Waving)) New people, old timers and a dash of crazy. That is why I Mingle.... Lovely to see you here Kal

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/27/15 01:02 PM
Thank you Marie. Thank you Adventurer. ((smiles)) from across the seas.

Annierooroo Joined Mon 10/20/14 Posts: 12552	Sun 09/27/15 01:03 PM
I like it but is this still in progress?

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/27/15 01:21 PM
It is complete

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Sun 09/27/15 04:02 PM
Pause with me In the stillness Where we once were One. Stay for awhile Near the fire Hear the sound Of eternity Just Stay. And Be. With Me. Thank you, Lady of the wind.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/27/15 04:51 PM
Pause with me In the stillness Where we once were One. Stay for awhile Near the fire Hear the sound Of eternity Just Stay. And Be. With Me. Thank you, Lady of the wind. Fires are so peaceful. A gorgeous feeling this invoked in me. Thanks for contributing your peace....be

tulip2633 Joined Tue 07/07/15 Posts: 2415	Mon 09/28/15 11:19 PM
Pause with me, sit with me, on this regular park bench. Rustle beside me, with the insects, birds and gentle wind, Put down your newspaper, The sky shall not fall tomorrow -despite - the doomsday 'prophets' scrolls. Stay, just this one moment and hold my hand. Be. That's so nice. Gives one reason to pause and enjoy the simple things; the beauty of nature.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1526	Fri 10/02/15 08:41 PM
Pause with me, sit with me, on this regular park bench. Rustle beside me, with the insects, birds and gentle wind, Put down your newspaper, The sky shall not fall tomorrow -despite - the doomsday 'prophets' scrolls. Stay, just this one moment and hold my hand. Be. This is real poetry. Seriously. This is what I strive yet cannot write. This is what drives me to write more and more. I love this one. Seriously.

LovablePeter Joined Fri 03/20/15 Posts: 192	Fri 10/02/15 08:54 PM
I enjoyed deeply

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 10/03/15 12:55 AM Edited by Ladywind7 on Sat 10/03/15 12:56 AM
Pause with me, sit with me, on this regular park bench. Rustle beside me, with the insects, birds and gentle wind, Put down your newspaper, The sky shall not fall tomorrow -despite - the doomsday 'prophets' scrolls. Stay, just this one moment and hold my hand. Be. This is real poetry. Seriously. This is what I strive yet cannot write. This is what drives me to write more and more. I love this one. Seriously. Thank you Mig. but your poetry is great. I am currently doing a Modern Poetry Course through the University of Pennsylvania. I would love you to join us if you have the time. It is free. Inbox me. You will learn sooo much.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 10/03/15 12:56 AM
I enjoyed deeply Thank you

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 01/23/20 12:57 AM
Bump.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3173	Thu 01/23/20 03:58 AM
Touching and moving poem .

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 01/25/20 03:28 AM
Thank you once more Julie.