Topic: The Streets
Totage's photo
Sun 11/18/07 03:44 PM
The Streets

Reds on Third and Second
Blues on Fifth and Sixth
Greens On Main and First

Dice droppin'
Guns poppin'
Bodies droppin'

Police sirens flood the streets every two seconds
Hearse fill the graveyards every three days
Everyday is just a struggle to breahte

Twitch's photo
Sun 11/18/07 03:47 PM
Sounds just like Yonkers NY
Nice Totagedrinker

Totage's photo
Sun 11/18/07 03:49 PM
Thanks, My trip to Detroit a few years ago inspired this poem.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 11/18/07 03:49 PM
Very discriptive... flowerforyou

Sounds like my old neighboorhood...frown

Totage's photo
Sun 11/18/07 03:53 PM
Thanks

Sadly my hometown is starting to get this way. Growing up, it wasn't too bad, compared to how it is now, mainly due to the steel industry in America.frown

RICKG1961's photo
Sun 11/18/07 04:24 PM
Edited by RICKG1961 on Sun 11/18/07 04:32 PM
Yakima washington is that way
drug's being sold every where
gang's shoting each other
what happen to the good old day's
try bring up a teen ager these day's

Dragoness's photo
Sun 11/18/07 04:26 PM
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Sun 11/18/07 06:14 PM
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LAMom's photo
Mon 11/19/07 08:46 AM
So sad to see what the world around us has come to be,,, Nice write,,,

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TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 11/19/07 09:18 AM
Nice write glad I don't live in that neighborhood shshss mine is so quiet it is unreal lol.bigsmile