Topic: Destroyed In Your Love
Sidharth_09's photo
Thu 04/26/18 12:06 PM
Reminiscent, I recall the times we had 
When I felt, your comforting hands.
When your eyes, shined with love for me
When your love, was deeper than the sea.

When it seemed you completed my life 
When I regarded you as my paradise.
But, blinded in love, I didn’t realize
That even you, had a wicked side.

I still remember, that disturbing day
That day… when you drew away.
Shattered, my life was in a disarray
Coldly, we parted, on our separate ways.

I miss, your comforting hands
But, you need space, I understand.
I aspire, that love in your eyes
But, I guess all that was lies.

Even Adam, wouldn’t have cried
on being banished, from the paradise.
The way, tears of blood, I cried
Upon loosing you… My paradise.

You left me, with my fears 
You gifted my eyes, many tears.
Still I hope, you smile for years
For I value, your smile more than my tears.

You tricked me, in your satanic spell
Yet for your future, I wish you well.
For I can’t hate you, my darling dove
Even if, I get destroyed in your love.


Sidharth_09's photo
Thu 04/26/18 02:26 PM
Thanks I'm glad you liked it :blush:

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Fri 04/27/18 01:45 AM
I would change satanic spell to cruel spell. Satanic is too harsh and has different connotations. Otherwise, inspired and evocative. Very moving. Excellent work. You should publish.

exploringlife12's photo
Fri 04/27/18 02:31 AM
Some of it related to my ex.. however nicely said...

Sidharth_09's photo
Sun 04/29/18 01:31 PM
Yea I tried to create alliteration with the satanic spell & by doing so wanted to portray the manipulator as an embodiment of an evil figure, but I respect your feedback. Thank you for your readership, the honesty & the kindness of your feedback. :blush:

Sidharth_09's photo
Sun 04/29/18 01:32 PM
Some of it related to my ex.. however nicely said...
thank you glad you liked it :grinning:

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Sun 04/29/18 01:58 PM
:heart:brokenheart shadesdrinker :thumbsup:

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Mon 05/07/18 10:16 PM
Powerful! Love it! :heart:

Sandstorm7's photo
Sun 05/27/18 11:46 AM
Lovely poem .
Thanks for sharing
Dave.