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Topic: The bite of fake love
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 07/27/18 02:57 AM
There once was a lady who believed in God, then a snake appeared, the rottenest sod. He hissed his lies, decieved her by his mouthy disguise of tongue, sharpened in the demise of many that heard his woeful tale. Ah, the tail could strike, as the head leaving forked corpses that bled. Poison he was, poison he left Yet only the snake was bereft. An antidote on my Lord's lips. His venomous bite, a mere whip! 39 strikes less than your duress.

Aroundtheworld37 Joined Tue 09/05/17 Posts: 4122	Fri 07/27/18 05:51 AM
I like it...reminds me of someone I recently knew

The Wrong Alice Joined Thu 04/26/18 Posts: 1437	Fri 07/27/18 06:44 AM Edited by The Wrong Alice on Fri 07/27/18 06:46 AM
But what of Lilith, Twas her that killeth, And the snake was blamed, While she remained....... unnamed

Queenie Joined Thu 04/26/18 Posts: 16001	Fri 07/27/18 07:17 AM
Reminds me of someone I once knew

lovemaekar Joined Thu 10/04/07 Posts: 51	Mon 09/17/18 12:42 AM
Very Nice Poem

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Wed 10/03/18 02:53 PM
Thank you <3

Williams1981 Joined Fri 10/05/18 Posts: 4	Fri 10/05/18 11:25 PM
Nice

Palghat Joined Thu 05/10/18 Posts: 187	Sat 10/06/18 01:22 AM Edited by Palghat on Sat 10/06/18 01:48 AM
There once was a lady who believed in God, then a snake appeared, the rottenest sod. He hissed his lies, decieved her by his mouthy disguise of tongue, sharpened in the demise of many that heard his woeful tale. Ah, the tail could strike, as the head leaving forked corpses that bled. Poison he was, poison he left Yet only the snake was bereft. An antidote on my Lord's lips. His venomous bite, a mere whip! 39 strikes less than your duress. Let me tell you a story, of some men, how they turn mouthy It begins, as in this song... In my Llife There’s been heartache and pain I don’t know, if I can face it agaaiin Can’t stop now; I’ve travelled so far To change this Lonely Liife Then the song dribbles to .. I want to know what love is …. ... I want you to show it to me ... Typical Dem singers It should have been ... I don’t want to know what love is … It's for young in despair I will search for it When the ship needs repair In my Life… Ah, the tail could strike, as the head leaving forked corpses that bled. Poison he was, poison he left Yet only the snake was bereft. If i don't find a port very soon and you come my way, You are right .., I may sink you down join the corpses that bled In my Life ... You are right pain is all you find

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