Topic: He Rocks (Adult content)
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Thu 04/08/21 08:51 AM
But he has no insight
to the howling
that makes me shred
this skin
and see anew.

If time and chance had its way,
this skin would do as
snakes
and lizards do.

Then I would tattoo
every inch of me
with his kisses and sighs
between my thighs

But he knows me not,

yet

The ink is waiting for the flow and design.

JulieABush's photo
Thu 04/08/21 12:41 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Thu 04/08/21 07:09 PM
A lot of meaning, passion. Very creative

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Fri 04/09/21 01:48 AM
Deep and meaningful without being offensive

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Fri 04/09/21 11:48 PM
Thank you. He means a lot to me and inspires every inch of my mind, body, soul and spirit.

You know who you are my Sweet thang xxx

Patrick's photo
Tue 05/04/21 12:09 AM

She found me dead ,
Laying on the way side,
I was aside my self ,
Couldn't believe that I had died,
I seen her spark , loves first sign
As she approached me quickly
With a fire in her eyes,
I sat and watched , and wondered why,
Confusion sat in and I began to lie,
Apart from myself , I felt her love through a mysterious cry,
The ones who killed me began to sue,
She lifted me up as they walked on by ,
I felt her love and began to cry,
As she put me together, and made since of these lines,
Truly I love her forever , and together we will fly,
Up west at the set up on the shine,
I was broken in pieces by the wayside,
She put me together and brought me back to life.
But he has no insight
to the howling
that makes me shred
this skin
and see anew.

If time and chance had its way,
this skin would do as
snakes
and lizards do.

Then I would tattoo
every inch of me
with his kisses and sighs
between my thighs

But he knows me not,

yet

The ink is waiting for the flow and design.


JulieABush's photo
Tue 05/04/21 03:44 AM
Nice poem too:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Tue 05/04/21 06:04 AM
Very nice very well written

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Mon 05/10/21 04:14 AM


She found me dead ,
Laying on the way side,
I was aside my self ,
Couldn't believe that I had died,
I seen her spark , loves first sign
As she approached me quickly
With a fire in her eyes,
I sat and watched , and wondered why,
Confusion sat in and I began to lie,
Apart from myself , I felt her love through a mysterious cry,
The ones who killed me began to sue,
She lifted me up as they walked on by ,
I felt her love and began to cry,
As she put me together, and made since of these lines,
Truly I love her forever , and together we will fly,
Up west at the set up on the shine,
I was broken in pieces by the wayside,
She put me together and brought me back to life.
But he has no insight
to the howling
that makes me shred
this skin
and see anew.

If time and chance had its way,
this skin would do as
snakes
and lizards do.

Then I would tattoo
every inch of me
with his kisses and sighs
between my thighs

But he knows me not,

yet

The ink is waiting for the flow and design.




Interesting...

Laska Paul 's photo
Mon 05/10/21 05:16 AM


I'm no one to judge this Poem bcoz I am not a Writer .
There are so many great Poets here who can judge it well .
But, though .. I do not want to go barehanded so i
Give you 10/10 on scale for your Writing !


Welcome back after a Long Long Long Time !

We all Missed you !

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Mon 05/10/21 05:37 AM



I'm no one to judge this Poem bcoz I am not a Writer .
There are so many great Poets here who can judge it well .
But, though .. I do not want to go barehanded so i
Give you 10/10 on scale for your Writing !


Welcome back after a Long Long Long Time !

We all Missed you !


Xxx